eigener songtext

[>axl.rose<]

hallo!!

ich wusste jetzt nicht wo das genau reinpasst, aber ich denke hier ist es am besten.
also ich hab einen eigenen Songtext geschrieben und wollte wissen wie ihr den findet.
also ich würde mich über viele kommentare freuen

Every day we get new threats
Every day there comes a new fool
Who wants to have some trouble with us
What is all this good for?


Of course we have many things
Sadly, you can only dream of it
Because you never will be like we are
And so take it or leave it


Do your worst!
Do what you want!
But please let us alone
Do your worst!
Do what you want!
And please shout your mouth!

And if you don’t want to catch this
And you continue on be a pain in the neck
Then you can get what you deserve
But I tell you: you will live to rue it


Do your worst!
Do what you want!
But please let us alone
Do your worst!
Do what you want!
And please shout your mouth!

We know you have a reason for grudge us
We know the life it’s hard for you
But we don’t want to help you
´Cause you’re a fucking asshole (da kommt ein piiieeep xD)



Do your worst!
Do what you want!
But please let us alone
Do your worst!
Do what you want!
And please shout your mouth!

Do your worst!
Do what you want!
But please let us alone
Do your worst!
Do what you want!
And please shout your mouth!

joa also

schon mal danke im vorraus

 

[wilbour-cobb]

hey axl.rose,

wir haben hier ein lyrics-forum, wo sich viele leute um inhalt und sprachliche sachen bei songtexten kümmern.

poste doch nochmal hier:

https://www.musiker-board.de/vb/f197-songs-texte/