looking for my mind

[Maya1234]

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Looking for my mind

1. Strophe:
Lies, nothing but lies
Too many broken promises, you gave me
with dreams running dry in the sun
you´re always on the run
taking a look into your mirror
I see your twisted smile
a beautiful appearance in the face of failure

Ref:
I turn around
looking for my mind

2. Strophe:
Lies, nothing but lies
you told me,
a beautiful illusion, you were never true
I see your reflection breaking
Shattered and down to your knees
You´re picking up pieces
All that remains is the reflection

Ref:
I turn around
looking for my mind


3. Strophe:
Lies, nothing but lies
Too many broken promises, you gave me
with dreams running dry in the sun
you´re always on the run
taking a look into your mirror
a beautiful appearance in the face of failure

Ref:
I turn around
looking for my mind

I turn around
looking for my mind

Lies, nothing but lies
and with my life broken on the ground
I realize in silence there´s no sound

 

[Maya1234]

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[LunaMoon]

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