Hamburg Girl

[The Spectre]

Hab eben noch schnell einen Song geschrieben, wer Lust hat kann mal gerne paar englische Korrekturen anmerken.
Viel Spaß dabei.
Gruß
The Spectre

Hamburg Girl

1)
Sitting by the phone
waiting for your every call
another day of a useless try
to forget you once for all

2)
It's the strong mans attitude
to wait without to wail
do you believe, my Hamburg Girl,
that a strong man never leave the trail

Chorus)
Oh my sweet Hamburg Girl
I take you in my arms again
Oh my sweet Hamburg Girl
you'll never here a cry of pain (from me)
Oh my sweet Hamburg Girl
have faith and give me your hand
Oh my sweet Hamburg Girl
I swear I'll love you 'til the end
Oh my sweet Hamburg Girl

3)
A tough guy who fight against his heart
A song of love honest and true
A heart of chalk on a kitchens board
What means that all parted from you?

4)
You whispered sweet things in my ear
about affection, about love
I'll wait as long as it will take
I promises it cause I can't get enough (from you)

Bridge)
Believe in me my sweet girl cause I believe in us
I'll be there if you need me cause I'm the man in you can put your trust

 

[Point Loma]

Kein Gewähr, nur Vorschläge
Hamburg Girl

1)
Sitting by the phone
gibt's mMn nicht, vllt sitting next to the phone
waiting for your every call
another day of a useless try
.. of useless shots/tries (finde ich schöner)
to forget you once and for all

2)
It's the strong mans attitude
to wait without to wail
do you believe, my Hamburg Girl,
that a strong man never leaves the trail

Chorus)
Oh my sweet Hamburg Girl
I take you in my arms again
I wrap my arms around you again
Oh my sweet Hamburg Girl
you'll never here a cry of pain (from me)
Oh my sweet Hamburg Girl
have faith and give me your hand
believe in us and ...
Oh my sweet Hamburg Girl
I swear I'll love you 'til the end
Oh my sweet Hamburg Girl

3)
A tough guy who fights against his heart
A song of love honest and true
A heart of chalk on a kitchens board
chalk?
What means that all parted from you?
hä??

4)
You whispered sweet things in my ear
würde kein Engländer sagen, vllt You whispered sweet nothings
about affection, about love
I'll wait as long as it will take
I promises it cause I can't get enough (from you)

Bridge)
Believe in me my sweet girl cause I believe in us
statt us würde ich you nehmen, schönerer Kontrast
I'll be there if you need me cause I'm the man in you can put your trust
...the man you can trust

Da lässt sich noch mehr dran machen.

P.S. He, she, it, das S muss mit !

 

[Wolfsbarsch]

Freaky; ''Hamburg Girl'' klingt wie ''Hamburger''. Und immerwieder ''my sweet Hamburg Girl'' .... Tipp; nächstes mal mit vollem Magen schreiben.

 

[The Spectre]

Dank dir Point Lama, dass das s mit muss weiß ich ja, fällt nur manchmal unter den Tisch beim schreibseln.

Naja Wolfsbarsch, um bei Hamburg Girl Hamburger herauszuhören, muss man schon singen wie Shane MacGowan.