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jonas krull
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ebend mal in einem gefühl runtergetextet.
feedback und verbesserungen gern gesehn... is der zweite absatz vllt ein refrain?
zu wenig griffig oder?
die z.t. satzzerreissenden absätze sind absicht
geht schon ein wenig in richtung rhytmik
danke euch
2:15 and im still alive
dont know what im waiting for
tomorrow. maybe. i've
seen it all before
the crap, sluts, dicks and whores
but cant stop stay till (the) dice
has fallen one more time
yeah i am still alive
watching but do not see any-
thing worse than me
im a hooker without a price
im a creepy city guide
show you the abyss of my life
2:25 and still i am alive
writing shitty lines about
how fucking shitty i really am
to boring to visit my place
to bored to go outside
looking at you
through the window
wait for someone to stave in
2:30 at least i feel relieved
i dont have to watch beauty anymore
cause i did fall asleep
finally world ends for me
'til tomorrow dawns again
and maybe one day
salvation comes
the wheel stops for me to turn
feedback und verbesserungen gern gesehn... is der zweite absatz vllt ein refrain?
zu wenig griffig oder?
die z.t. satzzerreissenden absätze sind absicht
geht schon ein wenig in richtung rhytmik
danke euch
2:15 and im still alive
dont know what im waiting for
tomorrow. maybe. i've
seen it all before
the crap, sluts, dicks and whores
but cant stop stay till (the) dice
has fallen one more time
yeah i am still alive
watching but do not see any-
thing worse than me
im a hooker without a price
im a creepy city guide
show you the abyss of my life
2:25 and still i am alive
writing shitty lines about
how fucking shitty i really am
to boring to visit my place
to bored to go outside
looking at you
through the window
wait for someone to stave in
2:30 at least i feel relieved
i dont have to watch beauty anymore
cause i did fall asleep
finally world ends for me
'til tomorrow dawns again
and maybe one day
salvation comes
the wheel stops for me to turn
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