Backstabber~

von Dai, 29.01.07.

  1. Dai

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    I'm back XD
    Schade, aber wahr. Und ichh ätte sehr gerne Hilfe hier bei, weil mir mehrere Sachennicht gefallen, ich aber so ziemlich im Dunkeln tapper T^T;

    Backstabber
    Please push me away from your for good dear, stab me back to the hell where I belong
    Feeling what I do for you isn’t right; I swallow the tears inside my own disgusted heart
    An imaginary letter forms inside my head, an apology to you for me being the one that I am
    Even a cold shower can’t give my sanity back to me; you got all of me under your spell

    As always I wait for your letter, checking the box more than you ever would do for me
    Even just a few lines make me break inside and I touch the parted heart around my neck
    The urge to tell makes me chock on my own breathing as summer memories come back to me
    A sad smile creeping back to me, how could my own rotten heart mess me up this well?

    Even if just once more, I want to hold you, platonic or not I still can feel your arms around me
    Even if just for a moment, the loneliness of this tortured life was erased in this summer night
    Two seasons later my own heart buried me inside this sweet remembrance, a rain of memories
    A grey shadow is now lingering over my faked smile, a plead to be pushed away from you

    As always I wait for you, I even try to help with your own weak heart that desires him
    Even just a few lines make me crumble inside as I touch the parted heart you gave to me
    The urge to laugh for you and steal you a smile makes me chock on my own breathing,
    Memories creeping back to me, how could my own rotten heart mess me up this well?
    Not even the glass is able to cut the disgust away, no matter how deep it goes inside of me

    Realising that I love you endlessly while I try to belong to someone else kills me slowly
    And makes me add another scar to my heart and maybe end my life where we first met
    I’m good at running away from myself, ain’t I? Haha…

    Don’t worry about the words I left unsaid to you, it was only a sore and broken “I love you”
     
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    deine verse werden auch nich kürzer, was?:D

    Backstabber
    Please push me away from your for good dear, stab me back to the hell where I belong
    -your+you
    -to+into
    evtl. -where

    Feeling what I do for you isn't right; I swallow the tears inside my own disgusted heart
    öhm. das hieße dass die tränen von anfang an im herz sind. oder schluckst du sie erst da hin?
    An imaginary letter forms inside my head, an apology to you for me being the one that I am
    is forming
    evtl. lieber the person statt the one that
    Even a cold shower can't give my sanity back to me; you got all of me under your spell
    evtl bring my sanity back
    die kalte dusche find ich nich soo toll, passt vom stil her nich so find ich, irgendwas mit regen oder so wäre passender imho

    As always I wait for your letter, checking the box more than you ever would do for me
    'm waiting
    Even just a few lines make me break inside and I touch the parted heart around my neck
    hmmm lines? oke, words willste nich, wa?
    The urge to tell makes me choke on my own breathing as summer memories come back to me
    evtl. tell you
    are coming back

    A sad smile creeping back to me, how could my own rotten heart mess me up this well?
    this well+so badly

    Even if just once more, I want to hold you, platonic or not I still can feel your arms around me
    i want to hold you, even it it's the last time .....irgendwie so in der art
    Even if just for a moment, the loneliness of this tortured life was erased in this summer night
    auch hier würde ich das eher umdrehen
    Two seasons later my own heart buried me inside this sweet remembrance, a rain of memories
    has buried, buries
    A grey shadow is now lingering over my faked smile, a plead to be pushed away from you
    by you?

    As always I wait for you, I even try to help with your own weak heart that desires him
    'm waiting
    für den rest der zeile brauch ich ne erklärung

    Even just a few lines make me crumble inside as I touch the parted heart you gave to me
    The urge to laugh for you and steal you a smile makes me choke on my own breathing,
    steal a smile from you
    Memories creeping back to me, how could my own rotten heart mess me up this well?
    see above
    Not even the glass is able to cut the disgust away, no matter how deep it goes inside of me
    can cut
    it's stabbing/verb into me
    Realising that I love you endlessly while I try to belong to someone else kills me slowly
    -that evtl. +how

    And makes me add another scar to my heart and maybe end my life where we first met
    I'm good at running away from myself, ain't I? Haha…

    Don't worry about the words I left unsaid to you, it was only a sore and broken "I love yo

    besser -to you

    genauso gut wie immer ;)
     
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    deine verse werden auch nich kürzer, was?:D
    Hm...nein XD..Schlimm? ^__^


    Backstabber
    Please push me away from you for good dear, stab me back into the hell (where) I belong
    -your+you
    -to+into
    evtl. -where
    *gleich Mal änder*
    Feeling what I do for you isn’t right; I swallow the tears inside my own disgusted heart
    öhm. das hieße dass die tränen von anfang an im herz sind. oder schluckst du sie erst da hin?
    Dass sie von Anfang an da sind. Herz ist ja bekanntlicherweise relativ XD
    An imaginary letter is forming inside my head, an apology to you for me being the person I am
    is forming
    evtl. lieber the person statt the one that
    Even a cold shower can’t give my sanity back to me; you got all of me under your spell
    evtl bring my sanity back
    die kalte dusche find ich nich soo toll, passt vom stil her nich so find ich, irgendwas mit regen oder so wäre passender imho
    -->Even the lukewarm rain can't bring my sainty back yo me..^
    ^
    besser?

    As always I'm waiting for your letter, checking the box more than you ever would do for me
    'm waiting
    Even just a few lines make me break inside and I touch the parted heart around my neck
    hmmm lines? oke, words willste nich, wa?<-- 100 Punkte XD Obwohl lines eigentlich denn sinn umwerfen..x__X
    The urge to tell you makes me choke on my own breathing as summer memories are coming back to me
    evtl. tell you
    are coming back
    A sad smile creeping back to me, how could my own rotten heart mess me up so badly?
    this well+so badly

    Even if just once more, I want to hold you, platonic or not I still can feel your arms around me
    i want to hold you, even it it's the last time .....irgendwie so in der art
    ^
    Dann ist es doch wieder was ganz anderes XD?
    Even if just for a moment, the loneliness of this tortured life was erased in this summer night
    auch hier würde ich das eher umdrehen
    90 oder 180 grad? : D ^____^
    Two seasons later my own heart has buried me inside this sweet remembrance, a rain of memories
    has buried, buries
    A grey shadow is now lingering over my faked smile, a plead to be pushed away by you
    by you?

    As always I'm waiting for you, I even try to help with your own weak heart that desires him
    'm waiting
    für den rest der zeile brauch ich ne erklärung
    Das dingenz, also der erzähler hilft einer anderen person mit deren eigenen problemen ..o_o wobei ich gerade emrke..dass ich mich selbst mit der satzstellung asgetrixt habe ^__^V
    Even just a few lines make me crumble inside as I touch the parted heart you gave to me
    The urge to laugh and steal and steal a smile from you makes me choke on my own breathing,
    steal a smile from you
    Memories creeping back to me, how could my own rotten heart mess me up so badly?
    see above
    Not even the glass is able can cut the disgust away, no matter how deep it goes inside of me
    can cut
    it's stabbing/verb into me
    huh? Ö_ö
    Realising (how) I love you endlessly while I try to belong to someone else kills me slowly
    -that evtl. +how

    And makes me add another scar to my heart and maybe end my life where we first met
    I’m good at running away from myself, ain’t I? Haha…

    Don’t worry about the words I left unsaid, it was only a sore and broken “I love you"

    besser -to you

    genauso gut wie immer ;)
    *bow*
    Wobei ich es doch immer wieder an den Nagel hängen will..@_@
     
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    deine verse werden auch nich kürzer, was?:D
    Hm...nein XD..Schlimm? ^__^
    :D


    Backstabber
    Please push me away from you for good dear, stab me back into the hell (where) I belong
    -your+you
    -to+into
    evtl. -where
    *gleich Mal änder*
    Feeling what I do for you isn’t right; I swallow the tears inside my own disgusted heart
    öhm. das hieße dass die tränen von anfang an im herz sind. oder schluckst du sie erst da hin?
    Dass sie von Anfang an da sind. Herz ist ja bekanntlicherweise relativ XD
    yu, meins ist relativ genau unterm brustbein:D
    An imaginary letter is forming inside my head, an apology to you for me being the person I am
    is forming
    evtl. lieber the person statt the one that
    Even a cold shower can’t give my sanity back to me; you got all of me under your spell
    evtl bring my sanity back
    die kalte dusche find ich nich soo toll, passt vom stil her nich so find ich, irgendwas mit regen oder so wäre passender imho
    -->Even the lukewarm rain can't bring my sanity back yo me..^
    ^
    besser?
    yu besser, wobei lukewarm komisch in dem zusammenhang oder? ich würde mir da ja icy rain befürchten:D

    As always I'm waiting for your letter, checking the box more than you ever would do for me
    'm waiting
    Even just a few lines make me break inside and I touch the parted heart around my neck
    hmmm lines? oke, words willste nich, wa?<-- 100 Punkte XD Obwohl lines eigentlich denn sinn umwerfen..x__X
    yu:D
    The urge to tell you makes me choke on my own breathing as summer memories are coming back to me
    evtl. tell you
    are coming back
    A sad smile creeping back to me, how could my own rotten heart mess me up so badly?
    this well+so badly

    Even if just once more, I want to hold you, platonic or not I still can feel your arms around me
    i want to hold you, even if it's the last time .....irgendwie so in der art
    ^
    Dann ist es doch wieder was ganz anderes XD?
    nö, das is das gleiche nur in anderem englisch ;)

    Even if just for a moment, the loneliness of this tortured life was erased in this summer night
    auch hier würde ich das eher umdrehen
    90 oder 180 grad? : D ^____^
    das vor dem komma ans ende des satzes sweetie:D
    Two seasons later my own heart has buried me inside this sweet remembrance, a rain of memories
    has buried, buries
    A grey shadow is now lingering over my faked smile, a plead to be pushed away by you
    by you?

    As always I'm waiting for you, I even try to help with your own weak heart that desires him
    'm waiting
    für den rest der zeile brauch ich ne erklärung
    Das dingenz, also der erzähler hilft einer anderen person mit deren eigenen problemen ..o_o wobei ich gerade emrke..dass ich mich selbst mit der satzstellung asgetrixt habe ^__^V
    oke sag bescheid wenn du den knoten wieder gelöst hast ;)
    Even just a few lines make me crumble inside as I touch the parted heart you gave to me
    The urge to laugh and steal and steal a smile from you makes me choke on my own breathing,
    steal a smile from you
    Memories creeping back to me, how could my own rotten heart mess me up so badly?
    see above
    Not even the glass is able can cut the disgust away, no matter how deep it goes inside of me
    can cut
    it's stabbing/verb into me
    huh? Ö_ö
    "stabbing" oder irgend ein anderes verb, das was mit in die haut reinschneiden zu tun hat, und die präposition ist "into"
    Realising (how) I love you endlessly while I try to belong to someone else kills me slowly
    -that evtl. +how

    And makes me add another scar to my heart and maybe end my life where we first met
    I’m good at running away from myself, ain’t I? Haha…

    Don’t worry about the words I left unsaid, it was only a sore and broken “I love you"

    besser -to you

    genauso gut wie immer ;)
    *bow*
    Wobei ich es doch immer wieder an den Nagel hängen will..@_@
    nixda :)
     
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    Erstellt: 07.03.07   #5
    Guten Abend, lahmheit mein Name XD
    Hm...nein XD..Schlimm? ^__^
    :D


    Backstabber
    Please push me away from you for good dear, stab me back into the hell (where) I belong
    Feeling what I do for you isn’t right; I swallow the tears inside my own disgusted heart
    öhm. das hieße dass die tränen von anfang an im herz sind. oder schluckst du sie erst da hin?
    Dass sie von Anfang an da sind. Herz ist ja bekanntlicherweise relativ XD
    yu, meins ist relativ genau unterm brustbein:D
    welch ein zufall.. da könnte meins auch ungefäh liegen... 8D ODer doch auf der anderen seite? ;D
    An imaginary letter is forming inside my head, an apology to you for me being the person I am
    is forming
    evtl. lieber the person statt the one that
    Even a cold shower can’t give my sanity back to me; you got all of me under your spell
    evtl bring my sanity back
    die kalte dusche find ich nich soo toll, passt vom stil her nich so find ich, irgendwas mit regen oder so wäre passender imho
    -->Even the lukewarm rain can't bring my sanity back yo me..^
    ^
    besser?
    yu besser, wobei lukewarm komisch in dem zusammenhang oder? ich würde mir da ja icy rain befürchten:D
    auch wieder wahr XD

    As always I'm waiting for your letter, checking the box more than you ever would do for me
    'm waiting
    Even just a few lines make me break inside and I touch the parted heart around my neck
    hmmm lines? oke, words willste nich, wa?<-- 100 Punkte XD Obwohl lines eigentlich denn sinn umwerfen..x__X
    yu:D
    The urge to tell you makes me choke on my own breathing as summer memories are coming back to me
    evtl. tell you
    are coming back
    A sad smile creeping back to me, how could my own rotten heart mess me up so badly?
    this well+so badly

    Even if just once more, I want to hold you, platonic or not I still can feel your arms around me
    i want to hold you, even if it's the last time .....irgendwie so in der art
    ^
    Dann ist es doch wieder was ganz anderes XD?
    nö, das is das gleiche nur in anderem englisch ;)
    Mein name ist Hase.. XD...wieso haben wir eigentlich farben getauscht? XD
    Even if just for a moment, the loneliness of this tortured life was erased in this summer night
    auch hier würde ich das eher umdrehen
    90 oder 180 grad? : D ^____^
    das vor dem komma ans ende des satzes sweetie:D
    Danke midear
    Two seasons later my own heart has buried me inside this sweet remembrance, a rain of memories
    has buried, buries
    A grey shadow is now lingering over my faked smile, a plead to be pushed away by you
    by you?

    As always I'm waiting for you, I even try to help with your own weak heart that desires him
    'm waiting
    für den rest der zeile brauch ich ne erklärung
    Das dingenz, also der erzähler hilft einer anderen person mit deren eigenen problemen ..o_o wobei ich gerade emrke..dass ich mich selbst mit der satzstellung asgetrixt habe ^__^V
    oke sag bescheid wenn du den knoten wieder gelöst hast ;)
    Ich glaube mein Hirn lag noch im Bett xD
    Ich bau den Satz Mal um..ö_ö
    Even just a few lines make me crumble inside as I touch the parted heart you gave to me
    The urge to laugh and steal and steal a smile from you makes me choke on my own breathing,
    steal a smile from you
    Memories creeping back to me, how could my own rotten heart mess me up so badly?
    see above
    Not even the glass is able can cut the disgust away, no matter how deep it goes inside of me
    can cut
    it's stabbing/verb into me
    huh? Ö_ö
    "stabbing" oder irgend ein anderes verb, das was mit in die haut reinschneiden zu tun hat, und die präposition ist "into"
    Hast du den groschen auch fallen hören? XD
    Realising (how) I love you endlessly while I try to belong to someone else kills me slowly
    -that evtl. +how

    And makes me add another scar to my heart and maybe end my life where we first met
    I’m good at running away from myself, ain’t I? Haha…

    Don’t worry about the words I left unsaid, it was only a sore and broken “I love you"

    besser -to you

    genauso gut wie immer ;)
    *bow*
    Wobei ich es doch immer wieder an den Nagel hängen will..@_@
    nixda :)
    well wie du siehst bist du immer noch im recht XD


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    Backstabber

    Please push me away from you for good my dear, stab me back into the hell where I belong
    Feeling what I do for you isn’t right so I swallow the tears inside my own disgusted heart
    An imaginary letter is forming inside my head, an apology to you for me being the person I am
    Even an icy rain can’t give my sanity back to me; you got all of me under your spell

    As always I'm waiting for your message, checking the box more than you ever would do for me
    A few lines make me break inside and I touch the parted heart around my neck that's almost strangling me
    The urge to tell you makes me chock on my own breathing as summer memories are replaying themselves
    A sad smile creeping back to me, how could my own rotten heart mess me up so badly?

    Even if just once more, I want to wrap my sore arms around you and hear your laugher in my head
    The loneliness of this tortured life was erased in this summer night if so just for a moment
    Two seasons later my own heart has buried me inside this sweet remembrance, a rain of memories
    and a grey shadow is now lingering over my faked smile, a plead to be pushed away by you

    Deep inside I know I'm only your trash can for burdens but I still can't help adoring you endlessly
    Even just a few lines make me crumble inside as I touch the parted heart you gave to me
    The urge to laugh and steal and steal a smile from you makes me choke on my own breathing,
    Memories creeping back to me, how could my own rotten heart mess me up so badly?

    Not even the glass is able to erase the disgust, no matter how deep it goes into the flesh

    Realising how I love you endlessly while I try to belong to someone else is killing me slowly

    ...makes me add another scar to my heart and maybe end my life where we first met at that buststop
    I’m good at running away from myself, ain’t I? Haha…

    Don’t worry about the words I left unsaid, it was only a sore and broken “I love you"


    I raped it @____@
     
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