hervorragende textstellen

[A.P.]

hab mir gedacht ich mach mal nen thread auf für textstellen die einfach geil sind, besonders gelungen, sich sehr gut reimen, etc. haben...

können eigene aber auch fremkompositionen sein

ich werd natürlich auch posten...

 

[Chad Savage]

"saw heaven and hell were lies,
when i'm god everyone dies"
- (The Reflecting God von Marilyn Manson)

 

[Iron-Maiden]

Eigentlich der ganze Song "Hallowed Be Thy Name - Iron Maiden", eben wegen der Bedeutung:

I'm waiting in my cold cell, when the bell begins to chime.
Reflecting on my past life and it doesn't have much time.
'Cause at 5 o'clock they take me to the Gallows pole,
The sands of time for me are running low.

When the priest comes to read me the last rites,
I take a look through the bars at the last sights,
Of a world that has gone very wrong for me.

Can it be that there's some sort of error.
Hard to stop the surmounting terror.
Is it really the end, not some crazy dream.

Somebody please tell me that I'm dreaming,
It's not so easy to stop from screaming,
The words escape me when I try to speak.
Tears flow but why am I crying,
After all I'm not afraid of dying.
Don't I believe that there never is an end.

As the guards march me out to the courtyard,
Somebody cries from a cell "God be with you".
If there's a God then why has he let me go?

As I walk all my life drifts before me,
Though the end is near I'm not sorry.
Catch my soul, it's willing to fly away.

Mark my words believe my soul lives on.
Don't worry now that I have gone.
I've gone beyond to seek the truth.

When you know that your time is close at hand.
Maybe then you'll begin to understand,
Life down here is just a strange illusion

 

[Mirage]

Hi,

eigentlich sind alle Texte von Maroon 5 total geil, aber der hier is meiner Meinung nach der Beste:

Where you are seems to be
As far as an eternity
Outstretched arms open hearts
And if it never ends then when do we start?
I'll never leave you behind
Or treat you unkind
I know you understand
And with a tear in my eye
Give me the sweetest goodbye
That I ever did receive

Pushing forward and arching back
Bring me closer to heart attack
Say goodbye and just fly away
When you comeback
I have some things to say

How does it feel to know you never have to be alone
When you get home
There must be someplace here that only you and I could go
So I can show you how I



Dream away everyday
Try so hard to disregard
The rhythm of the rain that drops
And coincides with the beating of my heart

I'll never leave you behind
Or treat you unkind
I know you understand
And with a tear in my eye
Give me the sweetest goodbye
That I ever,ever, ever did receive

Pushing forward and arching back
Bring me closer to heart attack
Say goodbye and just fly away
When you comeback
I have some things to say

How does it feel to know you never have to be alone
When you get home, home
There must be someplace here that only you and I could go
So I can show you how I feel, feel, feel, feel

Vorallem die Strophe die ich unterstrichen habe.Wann habt ihr jemals das Wort "coincide" in einem Song gehört?
Sowas finde ich halt total genial, sehr ungewöhnliche oder selten benutze Wörter perfekt in einem Song einzubauen.
Und natürlich die hammer Bilder die einem in den Kopf kommen, wenn man sich den Song anhört (geht leider aus dem Text ohne Musik nich ganz so gut hervor).

Gruß

Chris

 

[A.P.]

zwei klassiker

WAR ENSEMBLE

the sport is war, total war
when victory is a massacre
the final swing is not a thrill
it's how many people i can kill


PIECE BY PIECE

You have no choice of life or death
My face you will not see
I'll rip your flesh 'till there's no breath
Dismembered destiny

As soon as life has left your corpse
I'll make you part of me
No emotion
Death is all I see

Modulistic terror
A vast sadistic feast
The only way to exit
Is going piece by piece

 

[Mirage]

Hi,

was auch hammer ist, sind so ziehmlich alle Texte von In Flames. Die sind oft richtig krasse Gesellschaftkritik, aber zum Teil so abstrakt geschrieben, das man echt lange über den Text nachdenk muss, um hinter seinen Sinn zu kommen.
Nehmt zum Beispiel 'Zombie Inc.' von Colony:


truth serves them embrace
and defend her case
part flattery, part threats
"for those who cling to this
dominion will partake in its fall"

with his silence, he passes the
judgement over them
"with your feverish signs of force
you'll make them and yourself to
believe that he still retains his full power"

as a platform for divine foundations,
you want to make them suck

shallowness and beauty
was all that concerned her body
but the soul, her divine guest
were thrust to the bottom

surrendered to the sect
that has risen from its womb
"for those who cling to this
dominion will partake in its fall"

Könntet ihr direkt sagen, was sie damit ausdrücken wollen? (ich glaube ich weiß es mittlerweile, will aber mal eure Antworten sehen )

Oder mein absoluter Lieblings Song von ihnen, zwar eher wegen der Musik, aber : 'Colony' von Colony

in your world, the day is no threat
in my world, there is an absence of light
"genetic superior cell" controlled
by the fathomless and unbearable

a radical new Form of plastic and rage
biologically optimized
but with a strangling pulse

in your world, you find me worthy
in my world, I "parashoot" my life
a virtual drugstore populated
by the fathomless and unbearable

machine, meat and blood
in an intimate relationship
the new - superior -
more effective than all the preceding

when we can no longer
cry and reality is torn
then it's easy to forget
that the responsibility lies on us all

in your world, the night is no threat
in my world, the darkness
transforms to a vision of hell
populated by the fathomless and unbearable

Da sind unglaublich krasse Bilder drin. Und wieder ne hammer Kritik an unserer heutigen Gesellschaft (naja is von 1999).</a>

Und noch Ordinary Story (ja ich nerve ) :

egoism dictates human relations
a world where fashion outshines morality
here success is written in blood-red colours
designed by the thirst for power

gather the faithful and propose a toast
to the epoch of indifference

an all to ordinary story
with aftertaste so bitter
forced to be someone I don't want to be
I'm losing myself. sinking deeper down
I'm caught in the world wound web

a time represented by the void
an excuse without content
stuck in the abyss of existence
with a content void of excuse

an all to ordinary story
this is my story
with an aftertaste so bitter

sinking deeper down
I'm caught - I'm cage
I'm gone

Gruß

Chris
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[Mirage]

lest die einfach mal hier: http://www.darklyrics.com/i/inflames.html
und geht auch gleich noch auf die Hompage von Pain of Salvation (www.painofsalvation.com) und lest euch da mal die Lyrics zu dem neuen Album 'Be' durch. Einfach genial.
So falls ihr jetzt denkt ich hab zuviele Vorlieben, jep is so, aber ich bin halt immer für alles offen, so bekommt man schnell einfach zuviele
Lieblingssachen ;-)
btw, ich hab mir bei Maiden noch nie die Texte durchgelesen, aber vielleicht sollt ich das jetzt auch mal ( Wobei auf dem neusten Album versteht man die größtenteils auch so).

Gruß

Chris

P.S.: Nein, ich bin nicht geil darauf, möglichst viele Postings zu haben, ich hab nur viel zu sagen :screwy:

 

[Mandarinenmann]

finde persönliche diese stelle aus curse´s und gentleman´s WIDERSTAND
genial:
"Bin gegen Politik, die konstruiert ist uns zu kontrollieren
Kommunizier', indem ich kontroverse Verse komponier'
Komm mit mir und sieh die Welt so wie sie ist,
denn ich bin gegen jeden einzelnen Faschist der uns verseucht mit seinem Gift

und noch eine andere(wobei eigentlich der ganze text geil ist aber wie schon in der überschrift gesagt textSTELLEN):

"Mir ist egal wieviel du weißt und welcher Meister dein Lehrer war
Welcher Kaiser dein Herrscher ist,
wenn du weißt wer du selber bist"

MfG Mandarinenmann

 

[$tar/3u$$]

Oje, Textstellen die einfach genial sind?


There is a road that I must travel
May it be paved or unseen
May I be hindered by a thousand stones
Still onward I'd crawl down on my knees

Sowie das gesamte restliche Back to Times of Splendor Album...
(Es würde zu lange dauern alle diese perfekten Texte von Disillusion zu zitieren...)

Close to ending it all, I am drifting through the stages
Of the rapture born within this loss
Thoughts of death inside, tear me apart from the core
of my soul

Die schönste Textstelle die Opeth (ok,Herr Âkerfeldt) jemals geschrieben haben.

Und tut mir leid,Ich muss noch n´ganzen Text bringen, er ist zu gut um nur
Teile daraus hierhin zu posten:

The thoughts of yesterday forgotten
I like the way this new skin feels
Bring me splinters of tomorrow
Collect the parts where I win


Against the grain
Against the odds
I'll rise and I won't trip again
The dawn of a new day never looked
As good as this

Concrete breath and dust filled tears
A one way ride to inner peace
I never thought I'd join the others
Those who use the dice to solve

Ja, auch hier ist wieder mal zumindest das gesamte Reroute to Remain Album textlich vortrefflich, wenn nicht sogar jedes andere In Flames Lied....

[EDIT]:

P.S.: Nein, ich bin nicht geil darauf, möglichst viele Postings zu haben, ich hab nur viel zu sagen :screwy:

Dem hab Ich nichts mehr hinzuzufügen außer: dito.

 

[monocube]

die beste textstelle der welt

(natürlich von mir selbst)


she was a baker, she made us a cake
out of sundays and smiles
and arabian spice
we fell in love and
lovers don´t think twice


zu hören auf mp3.de, monocube, in dem song: "she was a dancer"
... ein sautrauriger song.

 

[twebworld]

she was a baker [... + ...] "she was a dancer"

...she was very busy

 

[simpsonhomer]

der refrain von dem song "in a darkened room" (skid row) find ich genial...

Tell me when the kiss of love
becomes a lie
That bears the scar of sin too deep
To hide behind this fear of running
unto you
Please let there be light
In a darkened room​

 

[Horschig]

also, ich find natürlich viele texte von mir genial, weil sie einfach genau das aussagen was ich denke... wie sollte es auch anders sein

n paar stellen von geilen lieder (song - band):

autumns monologue - from autumn to ashes

Eigtl hat das ganze Lied n super geilen Text, aber hier mal n kleiner ausschnitt, damit man weiss wodrum es geht

Oh why cant I be what you need
a new improved version of me
but i'm nothing so good
no i'm nothing
just bones, a lonely ghost burning down songs
of violence of love and of sorrow
i beg for just one more tomorrow
where you hold me down fold me in
deep deep deep in the heart of your sins

I break in two over you
I break in two
And each piece of me dies
And only you can give the breath of life
But you dont see me, you dont...


justified black eye - Joey Cape and Tony Sly

Ne Geschichte in Form eines Songs:

Taken for granted she sleeps by the phone
Waiting for a call from him but it seems he's never coming home,
14 beers later he is there without an answer
Once again she questions his lies he goes to bed with no reply

Tomorrow morning different story and he'll be a different guy
He'll justify her black eye with another lie.


hold the line - toto

simpel aufgebaut, aber es geht um den sinn

It's not in the way that you hold me
It's not in the way that you make me feel
You see
It's all about the way you do the things you do
The way you do it
You've got to hold it
Hold it

Hold the line
Love isn't always on time

i'm a fake - the used

wer das hier liest, weiss wodrum es geht

Do I drink? Do I date?
I've got perfect placement all my ink
Satisfied, in your eyes
I'm the biggest fan I've got right now
I made sure, that I look how I wanted to look
The people around me, the people surround me
I feel big, I feel tall, I feel dry (dry)

Just look at me, look at me now
I'm a fake, I'm a fake, I'm a fake, I'm a fake


the quiet place - in flames

der text für mich


Judge me now
Used to be afraid to let it show, bow down
Trusting in my own mind
Now everything's in place so much brighter from today


dial 595-escape - in flames

neben dem text

Escape familiar home
Memories remains alone
Reality trapped inside
The wicked descend


So, genug für heute
wer mehr von meinen tollen textstellen haben will, pm

achso, und meine eigenen texte verbreite ich nich
in der sig is ein teil von einem, wo andere zu finden sind, sag ich nich

edith sagt, html-code gibt es nicht

 

[Simson]

Schließmuskel in Vidiot:
"Die Kinder von heute die scheißen dicke Würste."

Sehr sozialkritisch.

Simson

 

[Wobbly]

Im Moment isses der hier... One bedroom apartment von Clann Zú

Don't leave me, I'm bleeding all over this linoleum floor.
I'm still in disbelief. I'm drowning between the clear and blackening.
From morning until night i'm losing sight of all the beautiful things.
There's nothing here for me without you right here beside me.
Why did you go, did you leave me here, leave me here to rot inside this empty place? I know that you are going far way.
From morning until night I'm losing sight of all the beautiful things.

A man sits naked in the middle of a room of a one bedroom apartment in new york city and no one knows he's there and no ones left to care wether or not the next drop comes out. And the blood would be warm and the blood would hug him just like she used to before she left him in this fucking mess where only one sentence repeats itself.
And this is it, it says I will never love again.
And on the fifth day he placed everything he owned in the centre of the room and he watched it burn as he recited all the beautiful words that had ever come out her mouth.
And these are the same words that mock him now and tell him that she is not coming back that he is nothing not worth a fuck and only one sentence repeats itself. I will never love again.
And for the first time in 25 years he cried rivers of black shitty oil that careered down his chest as the dam to his past broke, exploding, and its sinking all of his future now.
And that was then and this is now as the animals reach their fever pitch and the windows implode in silence out of respect for the dying out of respect for the dead.
I will never love again. And before he can say stop he's running down the street to the beat of his feet and past all the faces. Past all the places he's ever known, an past all the traces he's left of himself and into the sky and into the air past all the stars as he's calling out why. Over the ocean in search of the only love that will ever have.
And I will never love again.

 

[sunflower]

irgendwie sind hier fast nur englische texte angeführt....

he, was ist mit deutschen texten? sind die deutschen texte alle wirklich so schlecht?
ich finde prinzipiell, dass es schwer ist, gute deutsche texte zu machen, ohne dass sie "dumm" wirken. aber eigentlich sollte es einem doch leichter fallen, sich in seiner muttersprache auszudrücken, oder?
was ist also mit all den deutschen texten?

ich habe selber früher fast nur englische texte gemacht, aber seit ein paar wochen möchte ich plötzlich nur deutsche sachen machen, weil man sich da ganz anders ausdrücken kann und es viel direkter ankommt. aber es ist viel schwieriger, deutsche texte zu machen, so dass sie wirklich gut sind. wirkt oft ein bisschen holprig...
aber ich arbeite daran

 

[LeavingHope]

Also eine der besten Songwriter sind Djordje Balasevic und Trent Reznor..
Ja,Djordje Balasevic*schwärm*
Seine Musik zeichnet sich durch die Texte aus ist unglaublich authentisch und..wow..
Ost serbokroatisch von daher werdet ihr damit nicht viel anfangen können,aber einige Textzeilen kann cih ja mal übersetzt posten:

''Die Erinnerung ist eine merkwürdige Lupe die Kleinigkeiten vergrössert..
(..)
Nur der Schmerz ist im Leben sicher
Das Glück trägt ein sehr langsamer Postbote
ist schon gut...nur das ich diese Nacht überstehe
Morgen finde ich schon eine gute Ausrede''
(balasevic-poslednja nevesta daher ''die letzte braut'')

Dann noch Trent Reznor..
Gott da könnte ich jeden einzelnen Text posten..
Ich versuch mal einige herrauszufiltern


this is the first day of my last days
built it up now take it apart
climbed up real high now fall down real far
no need for me to stay
the last thing left i just threw it away
i put my faith in god and my trust in you
now there's nothing more fucked up i could do

wish there was something real wish there was something true
wish there was something real in this world full of you
(wish)

all through every forest
above the trees
within my stomach
scraped off my knees
i drink the honey
inside your hive
you are the reason
i stay alive
(closer)

the ruiner's a collector
he's an infector
serving his shit to his flies
maybe there will come a day when those that you keep blind will suddenly realize
maybe it's a part of me you took to a place i hoped it would never go
and maybe that fucked me up much more than you'll ever know
(ruiner)

how could i
ever think
it's funny how
everything you swore would never change
is different now

like you said
you and me
make it through
didn't quite
fell apart
where the fuck were you?
(somewhat damaged)

tried to save a place from the cuts and the scratches
tried to overcome the complications and the catches
nothing ever grows and the sun doesn't shine all day
tried to save myself but myself keeps slipping away
tried to save myself but myself keeps slipping away
tried to save myself but myself keeps slipping away
tried to save myself but myself keeps slipping away
(into the void)

a fool's devotion
swallowed up in empty space
the tears of regret
frozen to the side of his face

the smell of sunshine
i remember sometime

i've done all i can do
could i please come with you?
sweet smell of sunshine
i remember sometimes
(i'm looking forward to joining you finally)

all i do
i can still feel you
numb all through
i can still feel you
hear your call
underneath it all
kill my brain
yet you still remain

crucified
after all i've died
after all i've tried
you are still inside

all i do
i can still feel you
all i do
i can still feel you
all i do
i can still feel you
all i do
i can still feel you

all i do
i can still feel you
all i do (you remain)
i can still feel you (i am stained)
(underneath it all)

the more i stay in here
the more i dissapear
(the line begins to blur)

ich liebe diese texte..
Passen alle so evrdammt gut und ach...*vergötter*

 

[Moerchen]

Von Manowar Hail and Kill

Brothers I am calling from the valley of the kings
With nothing to alone
A dark march lies ahead, together we will ride
Like thunder from the sky
May your sword stay wet like a young girl in her prime
Hold your hammers high

AC/DC the Jack

She gave me the Queen
She gave me the King
She was wheelin' and dealin'
Just doin' her thing
She was holdin' a pair
But I had to try
Her Deuce was wild
But my Ace was high
But how was I to know
That she'd been dealt with before
Said she'd never had a Full House
But I should have known
From the tattoo on her left leg
And the garter on her right
She'd have the card to bring me down
If she played it right

She's got the Jack

Und ganz viel von Rammstein

 

[Chad Savage]

"Drop-cick, droplet, drop art, drop shot
or close your windows." - Flint

 

[Lord Worm]

Carcass - Room 101 (geschrieben von Jeff Walker)


DON'T CLAIM TO BE A PROPHET,
DON'T CLAIM TO SIGHT THE STARS,
BUT I CAN READ THE FUTURE,
IN ANGUISHED MENTAL SCARS,
I HAVE NO FAITH,
IN ANYTHING THAT YOU HOLD DEAR,
THE FUTURE IS OURS,
ONLY IN SWEAT AND TEARS,
AND THIS IS WHERE I BELONG,
IN MY ROOM ONE ZERO ONE,
AS I SIT HERE ALL ALONE,
IN MY OWN PRIVATE YEAR ZERO,