Decay - Korrektur & Meinung

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Vers

I said I'd love you,
but you'll never know
what it meant to be alone - with you

I'd tried to touch you,
but you'll never know
how it felt to burn alive - icecold.

I'd said, you mustn't leave me!
But I hoped you would wave me goodbye and go.

So I stood by you, I don't know why,
was like decaying inside, like I'd die...

instrumentaler Refrain

Vers

Breathing was difficult
if you were 'round me
was like you'd choke me
I gasped

Togetherness was really hard,
But it'd had been harder to leave you.

I'd said, you mustn't leave me!
But I hoped you would wave me goodbye and go.

So I stood by you, I don't know why,
was like decaying inside, like I'd die...

instrumentaler Refrain

Bridge:

Affected me!
Oppressed me!
Tried to cleanse my soul!

Bludgeoned me!
Strangled me!
Tried to cleanse my soul!

Remember my name!
Remember my face!

I will never forgive you!
I will never let you go!

I take those gun,
you'd levelled to me.
I pull that trigger
Catching/snaping you or me...
lieber to catch oder lieber to snap?



Würde mich über eine Korrektur und über Meinungen freuen =)