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Guten Abend,
ich schreibe seit einiger Zeit Songs. Mein Projekt „Fever Dream“ habe ich für meine Omi geschrieben, die bald Geburtstag hat. Ich hoffe, sie freut sich
Inspiration und Ziel:
Ich wollte einen Song schreiben, der meine Ansichten so.... widerspiegelt das war gar nicht so einfach. Ich musste vieles anders machen als sonst. Mein Ziel war es, einen homogenen Song zu kreieren, bei dem Text und Musik harmonisch zusammenpassen und sich gegenseitig verstärken. Der Text ist eher eine Geschichte als ein herkömmlicher Songtext. Das war die größte Schwierigkeit.
Songstruktur:
Der Song enthält mehrere Bridges, die neue Themen und Perspektiven einführen, ohne die Grundstimmung zu verlieren.
Ich habe bewusst mit Taktverzögerungen gearbeitet.
Obwohl "FeverDream" verschiedene Elemente kombiniert, ist es kein Medley, sondern ein in sich schlüssiger Song.
Wie findet ihr den Text so?
View: https://soundcloud.com/jjdani/wowo?si=2b9bfe6e768042eab51670bdbbd4ddb8&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
Lyrics:
Verse 1:
Caught in a loop, feels like I’m spinning,
Life on rewind, from the ending to beginning.
Every day’s the same, trapped in this game,
Looking for a pause, but everything’s the same.
(Feeling sick, am I the only one?)
(a moment in the sun)
Lift:
Where’s the exit? Trapped in this game,
Looking for a pause, but everything’s the same.
Pre-Chorus:
Feeling sick, am I the only one?
Needing a break, a moment in the sun.
Where’s the exit, the escape, I’m looking for the door,
Caught in the matrix, searching for
something more.
Chorus:
Stuck in time, like a fever dream,
Life’s playback on a broken screen.
Need an exit, a way to break free,
Where’s the code to unlock this scene?
Verse 2:
This cycle’s a curse, can’t find the end,
Playing life’s moments, over again.
Is there a way out, a secret path,
Or am I just caught in the aftermath?
Verse 3:
Looking for the break, the moment to breathe,
An escape from this cycle, a chance to leave.
Feels like a fever dream, can’t wake up,
In search of the code, to interrupt.
Pre-Bridge:
the moment to breathe, [An] escape from this cycle,
a chance to leave. Feels like a fever dream,
can’t wake up, In search of the code, to …….
Bridge:
Breaking free from this puppet show, so fake,
Give me scissors, these strings I'll break.
The curtain rises, oh, the truth we face,
Ugliness unveiled, in this grand disgrace.
Oh what joy of this grand disgrace
Pre-Chorus:
Oh, what joy, this grand illusion,
Dancing on strings, in our delusion.
Applause, applause for the grand deception,
Finding the exit? Oh, such a quaint conception.
Chorus:
Stuck in time, like a fever dream,
Life’s playback on a broken screen.
Need an exit, a way to break free,
Where’s the code to unlock this scene?
Chorus-Extension:
(ooooooh) the movement to breathe,
An escape from this cycle, a chance to leave.
Feels like a fever dream, can’t wake up,
In search of the code, to..to interrupt.
Bridge-02:
Behind the smiles, lies twist and weave,
A masquerade, in which we grieve.
Searching for truth, [in] this web we leave,
Shedding the masks, it's time to believe.
Movement :
Out of the shadows, into the light,
[Through] Who the fog that blinds our sight.
Leaving the scene, so cold and bare,
Shattering masks, yet the path is still a snare.
Verse 5:
Trapped within walls that cast no shadow,
In [a] maze with no end in sight, I wallow.
My [mind] cries for peace, but silence mocks me,
Searching for a key in a room without a door, desperately.
(like broken TV)
Verse 6:
Wrapped in shadows, the weight grows heavy,
Each step like lead, freedom ever so levy.
Beneath the surface, a silent plea,
Seeking salvation, yet bound, never free.
Chorus Variation:
Stuck in time, like a fever dream,
[Life’s] Let’s playback on a broken screen.
[Need an exit, a way to break free,
Where’s the code to unlock this scene?]
Verse 7:
In this labyrinth of echoes, where whispers haunt,
Each corner turned, a ghostly taunt.
The end is near, yet so far and faint,
A mirage of freedom, painted in constraint.
Verse 8:
Through the tempest of our own making,
Life’s playback on a broken screen.
In this labyrinth of echoes, where whispers haunt,
Each corner turned, a ghostly taunt.
The end is near, yet so far and faint,
A mirage of freedom, painted in constraint.
Verse 8:
Through the tempest of our own making,
Past the illusions, reality's awakening.
But the path is steep, lined with regret,
A journey to an end we wish to forget.
Pre-Outro:
So here we stand, at the edge of night,
Where darkness looms, still a fever
Asking me to break free
Where’s the code to unlock lock this scene?
Outro
Starting to unlock the scene
So here we stand, at the edge of night,
Where darkness looms, still a fever
Asking me to break free
Where’s the code to unlock lock this scene?
ich schreibe seit einiger Zeit Songs. Mein Projekt „Fever Dream“ habe ich für meine Omi geschrieben, die bald Geburtstag hat. Ich hoffe, sie freut sich
Inspiration und Ziel:
Ich wollte einen Song schreiben, der meine Ansichten so.... widerspiegelt das war gar nicht so einfach. Ich musste vieles anders machen als sonst. Mein Ziel war es, einen homogenen Song zu kreieren, bei dem Text und Musik harmonisch zusammenpassen und sich gegenseitig verstärken. Der Text ist eher eine Geschichte als ein herkömmlicher Songtext. Das war die größte Schwierigkeit.
Songstruktur:
Der Song enthält mehrere Bridges, die neue Themen und Perspektiven einführen, ohne die Grundstimmung zu verlieren.
Ich habe bewusst mit Taktverzögerungen gearbeitet.
Obwohl "FeverDream" verschiedene Elemente kombiniert, ist es kein Medley, sondern ein in sich schlüssiger Song.
Wie findet ihr den Text so?
View: https://soundcloud.com/jjdani/wowo?si=2b9bfe6e768042eab51670bdbbd4ddb8&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
Lyrics:
Verse 1:
Caught in a loop, feels like I’m spinning,
Life on rewind, from the ending to beginning.
Every day’s the same, trapped in this game,
Looking for a pause, but everything’s the same.
(Feeling sick, am I the only one?)
(a moment in the sun)
Lift:
Where’s the exit? Trapped in this game,
Looking for a pause, but everything’s the same.
Pre-Chorus:
Feeling sick, am I the only one?
Needing a break, a moment in the sun.
Where’s the exit, the escape, I’m looking for the door,
Caught in the matrix, searching for
something more.
Chorus:
Stuck in time, like a fever dream,
Life’s playback on a broken screen.
Need an exit, a way to break free,
Where’s the code to unlock this scene?
Verse 2:
This cycle’s a curse, can’t find the end,
Playing life’s moments, over again.
Is there a way out, a secret path,
Or am I just caught in the aftermath?
Verse 3:
Looking for the break, the moment to breathe,
An escape from this cycle, a chance to leave.
Feels like a fever dream, can’t wake up,
In search of the code, to interrupt.
Pre-Bridge:
the moment to breathe, [An] escape from this cycle,
a chance to leave. Feels like a fever dream,
can’t wake up, In search of the code, to …….
Bridge:
Breaking free from this puppet show, so fake,
Give me scissors, these strings I'll break.
The curtain rises, oh, the truth we face,
Ugliness unveiled, in this grand disgrace.
Oh what joy of this grand disgrace
Pre-Chorus:
Oh, what joy, this grand illusion,
Dancing on strings, in our delusion.
Applause, applause for the grand deception,
Finding the exit? Oh, such a quaint conception.
Chorus:
Stuck in time, like a fever dream,
Life’s playback on a broken screen.
Need an exit, a way to break free,
Where’s the code to unlock this scene?
Chorus-Extension:
(ooooooh) the movement to breathe,
An escape from this cycle, a chance to leave.
Feels like a fever dream, can’t wake up,
In search of the code, to..to interrupt.
Bridge-02:
Behind the smiles, lies twist and weave,
A masquerade, in which we grieve.
Searching for truth, [in] this web we leave,
Shedding the masks, it's time to believe.
Movement :
Out of the shadows, into the light,
[Through] Who the fog that blinds our sight.
Leaving the scene, so cold and bare,
Shattering masks, yet the path is still a snare.
Verse 5:
Trapped within walls that cast no shadow,
In [a] maze with no end in sight, I wallow.
My [mind] cries for peace, but silence mocks me,
Searching for a key in a room without a door, desperately.
(like broken TV)
Verse 6:
Wrapped in shadows, the weight grows heavy,
Each step like lead, freedom ever so levy.
Beneath the surface, a silent plea,
Seeking salvation, yet bound, never free.
Chorus Variation:
Stuck in time, like a fever dream,
[Life’s] Let’s playback on a broken screen.
[Need an exit, a way to break free,
Where’s the code to unlock this scene?]
Verse 7:
In this labyrinth of echoes, where whispers haunt,
Each corner turned, a ghostly taunt.
The end is near, yet so far and faint,
A mirage of freedom, painted in constraint.
Verse 8:
Through the tempest of our own making,
Life’s playback on a broken screen.
In this labyrinth of echoes, where whispers haunt,
Each corner turned, a ghostly taunt.
The end is near, yet so far and faint,
A mirage of freedom, painted in constraint.
Verse 8:
Through the tempest of our own making,
Past the illusions, reality's awakening.
But the path is steep, lined with regret,
A journey to an end we wish to forget.
Pre-Outro:
So here we stand, at the edge of night,
Where darkness looms, still a fever
Asking me to break free
Where’s the code to unlock lock this scene?
Outro
Starting to unlock the scene
So here we stand, at the edge of night,
Where darkness looms, still a fever
Asking me to break free
Where’s the code to unlock lock this scene?
