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Hi zusammen,
ein Freund meinte zu diesem Text: "Das kannst Du so nicht machen!" Seht Ihr das genauso?
Wie immer bin ich auch für Korrekturen zum Englisch dankbar. Und wenn jemand Lust hat, die Aussprache zu prüfen, hierzu habe ich hier eine Skizze online gestellt: http://soundcloud.com/mynodeus/sex-with-your-girlfriend-sketch-1 (Hinweise zur Aussprache von "indebted" und "bullet" habe ich schon erhalten).
Vielen Dank schon für Eure Kommentare!
- m.
Sex with Your Girlfriend
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When your girlfriend called me she said she's lonely,
she needs someone and you're out in the fields.
You just left with the troops for your last day
when she rang my doorbell and we kissed.
With trembling fingers I pushed up her T-shirt
when a bullet hit yours and it ripped you open.
She opened her legs and I gently touched her,
when your body touched the dirt.
I savoured her fluids and entered,
while your clothing soaked up yours.
We reached the point of no return, and you crossed it,
stepping into the void.
I had sex, sex with your girlfriend
when that bullet had sex with you.
We fell down, down on heaven
when your soul started the slow way up.
I had sex, sex with your girlfriend
when that bullet had sex with you.
We fell down, down on heaven
as your soul searched for a passage through.
Once again we slipped under the covers,
for you there was only a body bag.
They buried you with military honors,
and when earth surrounded you, she surrounded me.
I had sex, sex with your girlfriend
when that bullet had sex with you.
We fell down, down on heaven
as your soul searched for a passage through.
We got to know a few weeks later
when you had returned and my conscience was no longer raging.
We enjoyed ourselves and we had some beers,
I thought you're a nice guy but there remained a bitter taste.
She was my first girl and for me it had been sacred.
For you she was the last.
It had been my first time and I'm forever indebted.
For you it was the moment of death.
I had sex, sex with your girlfriend
when my bullet had sex with you.
We fell down, down on heaven
as your soul searched for the passage through.
(c) 2011 me@mynodeus.com
ein Freund meinte zu diesem Text: "Das kannst Du so nicht machen!" Seht Ihr das genauso?
Wie immer bin ich auch für Korrekturen zum Englisch dankbar. Und wenn jemand Lust hat, die Aussprache zu prüfen, hierzu habe ich hier eine Skizze online gestellt: http://soundcloud.com/mynodeus/sex-with-your-girlfriend-sketch-1 (Hinweise zur Aussprache von "indebted" und "bullet" habe ich schon erhalten).
Vielen Dank schon für Eure Kommentare!
- m.
Sex with Your Girlfriend
----------------------
When your girlfriend called me she said she's lonely,
she needs someone and you're out in the fields.
You just left with the troops for your last day
when she rang my doorbell and we kissed.
With trembling fingers I pushed up her T-shirt
when a bullet hit yours and it ripped you open.
She opened her legs and I gently touched her,
when your body touched the dirt.
I savoured her fluids and entered,
while your clothing soaked up yours.
We reached the point of no return, and you crossed it,
stepping into the void.
I had sex, sex with your girlfriend
when that bullet had sex with you.
We fell down, down on heaven
when your soul started the slow way up.
I had sex, sex with your girlfriend
when that bullet had sex with you.
We fell down, down on heaven
as your soul searched for a passage through.
Once again we slipped under the covers,
for you there was only a body bag.
They buried you with military honors,
and when earth surrounded you, she surrounded me.
I had sex, sex with your girlfriend
when that bullet had sex with you.
We fell down, down on heaven
as your soul searched for a passage through.
We got to know a few weeks later
when you had returned and my conscience was no longer raging.
We enjoyed ourselves and we had some beers,
I thought you're a nice guy but there remained a bitter taste.
She was my first girl and for me it had been sacred.
For you she was the last.
It had been my first time and I'm forever indebted.
For you it was the moment of death.
I had sex, sex with your girlfriend
when my bullet had sex with you.
We fell down, down on heaven
as your soul searched for the passage through.
(c) 2011 me@mynodeus.com
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