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Hallo,
unsere Band hat mal ein simplen Text geschrieben.
Kann den jemand grammatisch und von Inhalt her Korrigieren und Verbessern =)
Ist ein Rock/Punk Song...
Vers 1:
I walk across the street,
and I was alone.
I think must that be,
on the cold cold stone...
Refrain:
And I saw an angel,
In the sky...
I want to talk to him,
but he die...
Verse 2:
No one there to help me,
And I dont know what to do.
The angel lie in front of me,
i swear its true...
Refrain.
Vers 3:
They came a fire,
out of the ground,
they was a bride light...
...and I hear a crazy sound!
Refrain.
unsere Band hat mal ein simplen Text geschrieben.
Kann den jemand grammatisch und von Inhalt her Korrigieren und Verbessern =)
Ist ein Rock/Punk Song...
Vers 1:
I walk across the street,
and I was alone.
I think must that be,
on the cold cold stone...
Refrain:
And I saw an angel,
In the sky...
I want to talk to him,
but he die...
Verse 2:
No one there to help me,
And I dont know what to do.
The angel lie in front of me,
i swear its true...
Refrain.
Vers 3:
They came a fire,
out of the ground,
they was a bride light...
...and I hear a crazy sound!
Refrain.
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