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Hallo,
ich arbeite erneut an einem neuen Song. Die erste Idee zu dem Lied hatte ich 2009... hatte aber immer Probleme damit, einen Text zu finden. Den Refrain hatte ich schnell mal, aber die Strophen... ojeeeee... naja. Jedenfalls ist das jetzt einmal ein "Arbeitsdemo" ... hat noch schwächen. Würde aber sehr gerne 2,3 Meinungen hören , falls jemand Zeit hätte... was man machen könnte?
Link:
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13421498
Text
The Truth
Verse 1
In our darkest moments
Where no guiding light shines
Man is still there looking
For the truth
A world covered in silence
Our prayers left unheard
And in all of our sounds
Is no harmony
Chorus
and the blood runs through my hands
And it runs through my arms
And the only one to listen
Is the lowest of the gods
His hands provides some shelter
While the same red river runs
Into a heart of cuts and scratches
Though it´s beating like a drum
Verse 2
Heard a voice from a distance
It´s calling out my name
Like an echo from the mountains
to siece the truth again
So I lay me down
Where the shadows dissapear
And the truth brings salvation
To the ones who still believe
Chorus
And the blood runs through my hands
And it runs out from my arms
And the only one to listen
It´s the lowest of the gods
His hands provides some shelter
While the same red river runs
Into a heart of cuts and scratches
Though it´s beating like a drum
Bridge
And I could hear his word
In a children song
And the blood runs through my hands
And it runs out from my arms
And the only one to listen
It´s the lowest of the gods
His hands provides some shelter
While the same red river runs
Into a heart of cuts and scratches
Though it´s beating like a drum
ich arbeite erneut an einem neuen Song. Die erste Idee zu dem Lied hatte ich 2009... hatte aber immer Probleme damit, einen Text zu finden. Den Refrain hatte ich schnell mal, aber die Strophen... ojeeeee... naja. Jedenfalls ist das jetzt einmal ein "Arbeitsdemo" ... hat noch schwächen. Würde aber sehr gerne 2,3 Meinungen hören , falls jemand Zeit hätte... was man machen könnte?
Link:
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13421498
Text
The Truth
Verse 1
In our darkest moments
Where no guiding light shines
Man is still there looking
For the truth
A world covered in silence
Our prayers left unheard
And in all of our sounds
Is no harmony
Chorus
and the blood runs through my hands
And it runs through my arms
And the only one to listen
Is the lowest of the gods
His hands provides some shelter
While the same red river runs
Into a heart of cuts and scratches
Though it´s beating like a drum
Verse 2
Heard a voice from a distance
It´s calling out my name
Like an echo from the mountains
to siece the truth again
So I lay me down
Where the shadows dissapear
And the truth brings salvation
To the ones who still believe
Chorus
And the blood runs through my hands
And it runs out from my arms
And the only one to listen
It´s the lowest of the gods
His hands provides some shelter
While the same red river runs
Into a heart of cuts and scratches
Though it´s beating like a drum
Bridge
And I could hear his word
In a children song
And the blood runs through my hands
And it runs out from my arms
And the only one to listen
It´s the lowest of the gods
His hands provides some shelter
While the same red river runs
Into a heart of cuts and scratches
Though it´s beating like a drum
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