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Zanic
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juhu leuz!
ich nutze den text schon seit längerem, aber trotzdem grübel ich immer wieder darüber nach, wie ich ihn evtl. verbessern kann, oder ob der überhaupt grammatikalisch etc. so in ordnung ist. ihr könnt mir da sicher weiterhelfen, darum dann hier mal viel spaß damit! ^^
1. Verse:
I stray alone in the dark city's streets,
rain is crashing down on me.
A feeling of emptiness is fillin' up my mind,
memories, blown away by storm.
2. Verse:
Don't know where I can't go, don't know, where I belong,
don't even know, why I can't cry.
What's going on here and where is what I've lost?
Anybody out there, who can hear me?!
Chorus:
(Then tell me)
Who am I,
what am I,
why can I see me nomore?
(Tell me)
Who am I,
what am I,
why can I feel me nomore?
3. Verse:
I can't hear, can't see or feel anything,
only wondering what has happened to me.
Where is that helping hand, once promissed to me?
I need you RIGHT NOW!
Chorus:
(To tell me)
Who am I,
what am I,
why can I see me nomore?
(Please, tell me)
Who am I,
what am I,
why can I feel me nomore?
Bridge:
There are a million words
said to me,
but I don't remember one single word!
Who can help me out of here...
Can you help me...?
Chorus:
(Then tell me)
... des kennt ihr jetzt schon ^^
so... dann vergreift euch mal dran.
liebe grüßlies,
Zan
ich nutze den text schon seit längerem, aber trotzdem grübel ich immer wieder darüber nach, wie ich ihn evtl. verbessern kann, oder ob der überhaupt grammatikalisch etc. so in ordnung ist. ihr könnt mir da sicher weiterhelfen, darum dann hier mal viel spaß damit! ^^
1. Verse:
I stray alone in the dark city's streets,
rain is crashing down on me.
A feeling of emptiness is fillin' up my mind,
memories, blown away by storm.
2. Verse:
Don't know where I can't go, don't know, where I belong,
don't even know, why I can't cry.
What's going on here and where is what I've lost?
Anybody out there, who can hear me?!
Chorus:
(Then tell me)
Who am I,
what am I,
why can I see me nomore?
(Tell me)
Who am I,
what am I,
why can I feel me nomore?
3. Verse:
I can't hear, can't see or feel anything,
only wondering what has happened to me.
Where is that helping hand, once promissed to me?
I need you RIGHT NOW!
Chorus:
(To tell me)
Who am I,
what am I,
why can I see me nomore?
(Please, tell me)
Who am I,
what am I,
why can I feel me nomore?
Bridge:
There are a million words
said to me,
but I don't remember one single word!
Who can help me out of here...
Can you help me...?
Chorus:
(Then tell me)
... des kennt ihr jetzt schon ^^
so... dann vergreift euch mal dran.
liebe grüßlies,
Zan
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