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Hi, hier ein kleiner Songtext, hab da noch nicht so viel Übung drin und tu mir auch immer recht schwer mit dem Schreiben, aber das liegt auch wohl an dem Problem micht in Englisch auszudrücken. Sind wohl auch (denke ich) ein, zwei Fehler im Text. Kritik und Verbesserungsvorschläge sind herzlich willkommen.
I've forgotten all your names
like you've forgotten how to smile
slowly faded in the course of time
can't remember your voices they strange to me
don't blame me for my mistakes it's just a bitter poetry
the only constant the voice that became silent
speaks in a repeat of a reminder of a dream
whispers words I don't like to hear
these words of you surrounds me
saved deep inside of me
I found myself behind these walls
And I could watch myself, watch myself
fallen apart
I've forgotten all your names
like you've forgotten how to smile
slowly faded in the course of time
can't remember your voices they strange to me
don't blame me for my mistakes it's just a bitter poetry
the only constant the voice that became silent
speaks in a repeat of a reminder of a dream
whispers words I don't like to hear
these words of you surrounds me
saved deep inside of me
I found myself behind these walls
And I could watch myself, watch myself
fallen apart
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