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DeBiba
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Hi!
also das hier ist mein erster Song den ich selbst geschrieben ahb und nun möchte ich von euch wenn möglich eine Rückmeldung. Also der Song ist als (Rock)Ballade gedacht.
The question
last year I felt in Love
what I didn't want to do,
I wanna talk to you ,
but you don't want this too.
I had been dreaming of a world,
only with me and you
But i hab know that it will never come true
So I felt desperatee, and I
didn't know what to do.
Chorus:
I was helpless, only becaus of
the question was why you don't feel this too
noboady could help me except of you
and the question was why you don't love me
too
I couldn't do anything,
the only thing was you
I wanna talk to you
but you don't want this too.
Chorus)
then:
Since this, a year has passed
but me feelings hadn't changed
I wanna live with you, because
I miss you!
Danke schon mal im Voraus sry shcon mal für die wahrscheinlich wahnsinnig vielen Fehlern hatte aber gerade keine Zeit schreib morgen eine Mathearbeit *Kotz*
Gru?
debiba
also das hier ist mein erster Song den ich selbst geschrieben ahb und nun möchte ich von euch wenn möglich eine Rückmeldung. Also der Song ist als (Rock)Ballade gedacht.
The question
last year I felt in Love
what I didn't want to do,
I wanna talk to you ,
but you don't want this too.
I had been dreaming of a world,
only with me and you
But i hab know that it will never come true
So I felt desperatee, and I
didn't know what to do.
Chorus:
I was helpless, only becaus of
the question was why you don't feel this too
noboady could help me except of you
and the question was why you don't love me
too
I couldn't do anything,
the only thing was you
I wanna talk to you
but you don't want this too.
Chorus)
then:
Since this, a year has passed
but me feelings hadn't changed
I wanna live with you, because
I miss you!
Danke schon mal im Voraus sry shcon mal für die wahrscheinlich wahnsinnig vielen Fehlern hatte aber gerade keine Zeit schreib morgen eine Mathearbeit *Kotz*
Gru?
debiba
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