Closing My Eyes For Daylight-> brauche feedback

  • Ersteller Wrath.bm
  • Erstellt am
W

Wrath.bm

Registrierter Benutzer
Zuletzt hier
30.01.11
Registriert
24.09.08
Beiträge
29
Kekse
0
das is ein text von mir, aber ich hab hauptsächlich auf den rhythmus der melodie beim schreiben geachtet ;) konstruktive kritik wäre nett der musikstil is hauptsächlich black metal mit hardcore elementen bedanke mich schonmal im voraus:)


Lying On Pure White Snow
My Blood Makes It Deep Dark Red
A Sword Pierce Through My Chest
Soon I´ll Make My Last Breath

Looking Up To Sky
High The Ravens Fly
Keeping The Death In Their Eyes
Carrying Away My Soul

Imagine My Last Journey
Bleeding My Life Out
A Sunbeam Shines On My Head
Closing The Curtain Of My Life

Looking Up To Sky
High The Ravens Fly
Keeping The Death In Their Eyes
Carrying Away My Soul

Seeing A Tunnel...
...Blinding Light
Feeling The Reaper Coming
I´m Frozen Inside

I´m Leaving This World To A Better Place
Far Away From The Human Race
The Ravens carry My Soul Away
I´m Closing My Eyes For The Light Of The Day

Blowing Out The Candle Of Life
In This World I Have Payed The Price
The Curtain is Falling Nevermore
On Higher Spheres My Soul Lives On

I´m Leaving This World To A Better Place
Far Away From The Human Race
The Ravens carry My Soul Away
I´m Closing My Eyes For The Light Of The Day

Buried Is My Corpse With Snow
Fallen In An Insane War
Mourning Is Spreading Far Away
Upon The Ones I Left Without Farewell

Looking Up To Sky
High The Ravens Fly
Keeping The Death In Their Eyes
Carrying Away My Soul
 

Ähnliche Themen

Neue Themen

Unser weiteres Online-Angebot:
Bassic.de · Deejayforum.de · Sequencer.de · Clavio.de · Recording.de

Musiker-Board Logo
Oben