Daddy please stop

[CokeGirl]

Hier ist mal was von mir

Ich habe das Lied auch schon gesungen und aufgenommen, aber ich kann hier keine wav dateien hochladen,daher habe ich das Lied zu youtube gestellt und naja..was sagt ihr dazu?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pVvilP467fQ

Und hier der Songtext:

Refrain:
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...

Strophe 1:
Because of you my life change bad
Now I´m here without my dad
All the years I was so scared
But in the end nobody cared

Bridge:
You make me sad and
You make me unsure
You make me angry and
Make me poor

But now....

Refrain:
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...

Strophe 2:
I come to you because I`m pol i te
But you know exact I belong to the other side
When I needed you you weren`t there
And I asked myself where are you were

Bridge:
You make me sad and
You make me unsure
You make me angry and
Make me poor

And now...

Refrain:
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...

 

[desgraca]

also dein text enthält ne handvoll grammatikfehler,,,,

aber den song find ich absolut klasse,,,,,,kennst du cat power? an die erinnerst du michn bisschen

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ym2XgarS7Ho

 

[CokeGirl]

also dein text enthält ne handvoll grammatikfehler,,,,

könntest du die vielleicht verbessern? Ich bin da nicht so gut drin

aber den song find ich absolut klasse,,,,,,

danke

kennst du cat power? an die erinnerst du michn bisschen

bis jetzt noch nicht..aber den Song find ich toll

 

[desgraca]

kann ick machn

Refrain:
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...

Strophe 1:
Because of you my life change bad
because of you my life went bad
oder because of you my life turned bad
Now I´m here without my dad
All the years I was so scared
But in the end nobody cared

Bridge:
You make me sad and
You make me unsure
You make me angry and
Make me poor

But now....

Refrain:
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...

Strophe 2:
I come to you because I`m pol i te
vermutlich eher "i visit you"?
oder auch "i come to see you"
But you know exact I belong to the other side
exactly
When I needed you you weren`t there
And I asked myself where are you were
entweder and i asked myself where you were
oder and i asked myself "where are you, where"
wobei sich nur das untere dann auch reimt

Bridge:
You make me sad and
You make me unsure
You make me angry and
Make me poor

And now...

Refrain:
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...

rausgehört hab ichs eigentlich eh nich..

 

[CokeGirl]

ok.. danke

 

[x-Riff]

Darf ich dann noch mal ne Frage stellen?

You ruin my life but now

Soll das heißen: Du ruinierst mein Leben aber nun? Also so ne Art unvollständiger Satz? Oder peile ich da grad was nicht?

 

[CokeGirl]

Darf ich dann noch mal ne Frage stellen?

Na klar

Soll das heißen: Du ruinierst mein Leben aber nun? Also so ne Art unvollständiger Satz? Oder peile ich da grad was nicht?

genau so meinte ich das

 

[donay]

frage an natives:
geht: You make me unsure
?
müsste das nicht: you make me unsecure heissen?

 

[donay]

ich probier mich auch noch. einfach das lyrische. english binich nicht der beste hier

Refrain:
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...

Strophe 1:
Because of you my life change bad
because of you my life went bad
oder because of you my life turned bad
Now I´m here without my dad
All the years I was so scared
But in the end nobody cared
wie wärs mit:
all the years i've been so scared
but it seems (like) nobody cares

Bridge:
You make me sad and
You make me unsure siehe post zuvor
You make me angry and
Make me poor
finde ich etwas 'normal' der reim. irgendein bild wäre hier schön...

But now....

Refrain:
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...

Strophe 2:
I come to you because I`m pol i te
vermutlich eher "i visit you"?
oder auch "i come to see you"
But you know exact I belong to the other side
exactly
When I needed you you weren`t there
And I asked myself where are you were
entweder and i asked myself where you were
oder and i asked myself "where are you, where"
wobei sich nur das untere dann auch reimt

Bridge:
You make me sad and
You make me unsure
You make me angry and
Make me poor

And now...

Refrain:
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...
Daddy please stop
You ruin my life but now
Daddy please stop
For me you are nothing oh...


ja, das wärs mal von mir. nur vorschläge. das english hat nate ja shon abgesegnet

 

[desgraca]

unsecure gibts überhaupt nich, insecure gibts unsure lässt sich aber ganz ähnlich verwenden.

 

[donay]

ah, ok...

 

[CokeGirl]

wie wärs mit:
all the years i've been so scared
but it seems (like) nobody cares

Ja das klingt besser

finde ich etwas 'normal' der reim. irgendein bild wäre hier schön...

Da ist mir nichts besseres eingefallen