
Lord Kartoffel
Registrierter Benutzer
So, hab bis 4 Uhr dran geschrieben, ist ein Gesamtwerk aus 3 Texten, die aber zuvor im Müll gelandet sind, mit dem bin ich recht zufrieden...ein sehr gefühlsbetonter Song (naja hier poste ich nur den Text, will ja nicht alles veröffentlichen). Bitte kritisieren! 
I hold on tight the red rope
On a black, cold winter day
lights lying frozen in my head
I cannot move, I have to stay
Try to fall asleep
Try to sink so deep
Try to swim under the ice
I try my faith to keep
-- Bridge --
I sit down between the broken glasses
Know I´ve been a fool and wasted all chances
-- Bridge --
Do you remember the words i`ve said to you
Do you rember the eyes you saw into
Do you still feel the feelings I felt with you
...I wish you could feel them, too
-- Chorus --
I´m spinning around my red rope
It cuts my skin so deep
I´m getting paralized by counting the blood drops,
I don`t know where my thouts flow,
That I tried to keep
-- Chorus --
I hold on tight the black rope
And It`s frozen like you
My hands are coverd with black, wet dust
And it covers you, too
I´m falling asleep
I´m sinking too deep
Drifting under the ice
No Pain, no feelings too keep
...we fall into sleep
[irgendnen Solo oder irgendwatt]
-- Chorus --
I´m spinning around my red rope
It cuts my skin so deep
I´m getting paralized by counting the blood drops,
I don`t know where my mind goes,
That I tried to keep
-- Chorus --

I hold on tight the red rope
On a black, cold winter day
lights lying frozen in my head
I cannot move, I have to stay
Try to fall asleep
Try to sink so deep
Try to swim under the ice
I try my faith to keep
-- Bridge --
I sit down between the broken glasses
Know I´ve been a fool and wasted all chances
-- Bridge --
Do you remember the words i`ve said to you
Do you rember the eyes you saw into
Do you still feel the feelings I felt with you
...I wish you could feel them, too
-- Chorus --
I´m spinning around my red rope
It cuts my skin so deep
I´m getting paralized by counting the blood drops,
I don`t know where my thouts flow,
That I tried to keep
-- Chorus --
I hold on tight the black rope
And It`s frozen like you
My hands are coverd with black, wet dust
And it covers you, too
I´m falling asleep
I´m sinking too deep
Drifting under the ice
No Pain, no feelings too keep
...we fall into sleep
[irgendnen Solo oder irgendwatt]
-- Chorus --
I´m spinning around my red rope
It cuts my skin so deep
I´m getting paralized by counting the blood drops,
I don`t know where my mind goes,
That I tried to keep
-- Chorus --
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