Kitschiger(?) Love(?) Song ohne Titel - C&C pls!

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Mein erster Versuch wenigstens ein paar Reime reinzubringen. Vielleicht auch ein wenig kitschig das ganze, aber mh naja, Selbsteinschaetzung ist schwierig. Meinungen, Kritik, Comments und andere Obszoenitaeten sind erwuenscht :D

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[insert song title here]

from far away i hear the boarding call
the shining "Leaving Airplanes" sign
announcements in the departures hall
i'm glancing at the orange sunset skyline

with the one-way ticket in my hand
i walk slowly to delay check in
still remembering our dreams and plans
your last words were "See you then!"
i hear those words over and over again

it's always hard losing something
but the fact that it was you
gives my heart an aching sting
i'll never forget you my love
and if i there would be miracles
how I wished one would happen
and let me see you one more time

now the distance between us is far
you are heaven, i am earth
this sudden change left a scar
in my heart which feels like ripped off my chest
restless i wandered around, trying to do my best

but there was nothing i could do
i knew and looked up into the clear blue
sky and a prism of light gave me a hint
i sing my feelings like the wind

it's always hard losing something
but the fact that it was you
gives my heart an aching sting
i'll never forget you my love
i wanted to tell you "I love you" more
i ask myself "what shall i live for ?"
when i can never see you again

what would have you done ?
what would have you said ?
the announcement now more urging
get going! get going!

trying to shake off these emerging
feelings i try to be strong for you
the plane's taking off, cutting the
black night sky which becomes clear
higher and higher, i feel you are near

it's always hard losing something
but the fact that it was you
gives my heart an aching sting
i'll never forget you my love
we had not much time to share together
but i am happy to knew you
thank you for loving me
i promise to make your dreams come true
 
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