Kitschiger(?) Love(?) Song ohne Titel - C&C pls!

von cherrypunk, 09.10.05.

  1. cherrypunk

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    Erstellt: 09.10.05   #1
    Mein erster Versuch wenigstens ein paar Reime reinzubringen. Vielleicht auch ein wenig kitschig das ganze, aber mh naja, Selbsteinschaetzung ist schwierig. Meinungen, Kritik, Comments und andere Obszoenitaeten sind erwuenscht :D

    Habe noch keinen Songtitel , wem also was passendes einfaellt....

    [insert song title here]

    from far away i hear the boarding call
    the shining "Leaving Airplanes" sign
    announcements in the departures hall
    i'm glancing at the orange sunset skyline

    with the one-way ticket in my hand
    i walk slowly to delay check in
    still remembering our dreams and plans
    your last words were "See you then!"
    i hear those words over and over again

    it's always hard losing something
    but the fact that it was you
    gives my heart an aching sting
    i'll never forget you my love
    and if i there would be miracles
    how I wished one would happen
    and let me see you one more time

    now the distance between us is far
    you are heaven, i am earth
    this sudden change left a scar
    in my heart which feels like ripped off my chest
    restless i wandered around, trying to do my best

    but there was nothing i could do
    i knew and looked up into the clear blue
    sky and a prism of light gave me a hint
    i sing my feelings like the wind

    it's always hard losing something
    but the fact that it was you
    gives my heart an aching sting
    i'll never forget you my love
    i wanted to tell you "I love you" more
    i ask myself "what shall i live for ?"
    when i can never see you again

    what would have you done ?
    what would have you said ?
    the announcement now more urging
    get going! get going!

    trying to shake off these emerging
    feelings i try to be strong for you
    the plane's taking off, cutting the
    black night sky which becomes clear
    higher and higher, i feel you are near

    it's always hard losing something
    but the fact that it was you
    gives my heart an aching sting
    i'll never forget you my love
    we had not much time to share together
    but i am happy to knew you
    thank you for loving me
    i promise to make your dreams come true
     
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