Love's got no mercy

[Maddi]

Ein neuer Text. Kurzer Sinn. Sagt mir was ihr meint
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Love's got no mercy





As I said „Mercy was standing in natures boundary“​

I meant the gently beast,claws so sharp,it's teeth bloody red​

You can't imagine the words I said:​

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Love's got no mercy​

it's cruel and bad​

Love's got no mercy​

heartache leads to death​

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Mercy said I wasn't right​

Mercy said I couldn't tell​

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It's eyes,so insecure,unseeing so gazing at me​

I can tell mercy wasn't there at all​

a steal of glance ​

it's so insane​

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Love's got no mercy​

it's cruel and bad​

Love's got no mercy​

heartache leads to death​

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Mercy said I wasn't right​

Mercy said I couldn't tell​

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No mercy​

No mercy​

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Love's got no mercy​

it's cruel and bad​

Love's got no mercy​

heartache leads to death​

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Mercy looked me in my eyes ​

mercy took of its diguise.​

 

[Jay-P]

Hm, die Grundaussage deines Textes ist ja recht klar, aber ich verstehe den Sinn von diesem Part nicht: "Mercy said I wasn't right
Mercy said I couldn't tell"
Wieso sagt die Gnade, dass die Liebe doch nicht gnadenlos ist?

Jay-P

 

[x-Riff]

Also mercy spielt quasi den Gegenpart.
Insofern finde ich das alles schon folgerichtig und auch klasse gemacht.

mercy took of its diguise.

Das verstehe ich nicht. to take of? oder take off?

Ansonsten finde ich den Text klasse.

 

[Maddi]

Das verstehe ich nicht. to take of? oder take off? ich immer mit meinen flüchtigkeitsfehlern xD.... natürlich take off

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