Stand up and Fight

von PhantomLord, 21.08.07.

  1. PhantomLord

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    hab nach langer langer zeit mal wieder was gemacht .. befürchte mein englisch ist ein bisschen eingerostet. also postet mal eure meinung


     
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    da stecken ein paar fehler drin, besonders im hinteren teil.

    Stand up and Fight

    on a cold dark winter morning
    a man went for a walk.
    he bought the daily news
    on his way down to the park

    the newspaper was full of terrorism,
    kann man schriftlich nicht per apostroph abkürzen
    full of war and full of hate.
    and the words they grabbed his mind
    and he became afraid.

    he began to freeze, his body began to shake
    he saw phantom terrorists, at night he lied awake

    from now on he lived in fear and claimed security.
    cause the only thing he really wanted was to resume his dignity
    politicians promised him a life thats without fear
    das "thats" muss raus
    but he forgot the consequences, what soon he's got to bear
    da muss eine andere zeit am ende, "what soon he had to bear"


    Ref. 2x
    come on stand up
    tear up the chains on your hands/feet !
    "tear away" wäre eigentlich deutlicher, "tear up" hat eine ganz klein wenig andere bedeutung, mehr so "in fetzen reissen", metall "zerfetzt" ja irgendwie nicht.
    come on stand up
    and tear up the chains !


    to achieve security,
    they took him his freedom.
    das "him" muss raus
    cause if he couldn't do a thing,
    he couldn't do it wrong.

    from now on he was observed
    on every step he made
    and every word he said
    had to be deliberate

    hide and seek every fuckin' day.
    throughout his life the same.
    das ist so kein satz, da fehlt das verb. "...his life was the same" vielleicht?
    he always had to hide in this one and only game.

    persecution mania was his companion in life
    "verfolgungswahn"?, das ist "persecution complex"
    and deep inside his mind the time for revolution was ripe
    so under the eyes of cameras he made plans of breaking free
    because his highest aim was to resume his liberty


    Ref. 2x
    come on stand up
    tear up the chains on your hands/feet !
    come on stand up
    and tear up the chains !


    the redoubtable thought-police became aware of him.
    they captured, they tortured and executed him
    to confirm that in the end for sure the state will win


    *whispered during solo*
    come on stand up
    tear up the chains on your hands !
    come on stand up
    and tear up the chains !


    Ref. 2x
    come on stand up
    tear up the chains on your hands/feet !
    come on stand up
    and tear up the chains !

    So he died as a martyr
    his death - a memorial
    many others followed him
    there was benefit for all
     
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