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Suicide
She stares at the wall in front of her
The colour in her eyes appeared blur
she wants the frustration to disappear
and although she looks at that wall in fear
she wasnt even able to cry a tear
She doesnt knew any fuckin way out
She opened her mouth and tried to shout
But her bloody lips dont really moved
She wondered why she was so confused
To give up everything is her last resort
The sollution was easy, painless and short
She looked at the floor and saw the knive
She said to herself: fuck up this life
She finished the shit, that flies in the air
She punctured herrself she just doesnt care
She fucked up her live, and she was aware
the light is coming soon, on another moon
And as she saw the few happiest moments
She closed her eyes in this bad torment
She felt the pain and started to regret
She doesnt agree with this stupid effect
To give up everything is her last resort
The sollution was easy, painless and short
She looked at the floor and saw the knive
She said to herself: fuck up this life
To have an end like that was not her intention
An end like this was never mentioned
She throwed the knive away without attention
And soon, she was living on another moon
hauptsächlich geht es mir darum, dass mir jemand sagen kann was man stilistisch besser machen kann um mehr flow zu bekommen und mir die grammatikalischen fehler sagt.
danke im vorraus
chaz
She stares at the wall in front of her
The colour in her eyes appeared blur
she wants the frustration to disappear
and although she looks at that wall in fear
she wasnt even able to cry a tear
She doesnt knew any fuckin way out
She opened her mouth and tried to shout
But her bloody lips dont really moved
She wondered why she was so confused
To give up everything is her last resort
The sollution was easy, painless and short
She looked at the floor and saw the knive
She said to herself: fuck up this life
She finished the shit, that flies in the air
She punctured herrself she just doesnt care
She fucked up her live, and she was aware
the light is coming soon, on another moon
And as she saw the few happiest moments
She closed her eyes in this bad torment
She felt the pain and started to regret
She doesnt agree with this stupid effect
To give up everything is her last resort
The sollution was easy, painless and short
She looked at the floor and saw the knive
She said to herself: fuck up this life
To have an end like that was not her intention
An end like this was never mentioned
She throwed the knive away without attention
And soon, she was living on another moon
hauptsächlich geht es mir darum, dass mir jemand sagen kann was man stilistisch besser machen kann um mehr flow zu bekommen und mir die grammatikalischen fehler sagt.
danke im vorraus
chaz
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