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Hi, hab nen Text geschrieben, der bald vertont werden soll, allerdings bin ich in Englisch nicht der Beste, könntet ihr mal bitte nachsehen ob es fehler oder verbesserungsvorschläge gibt? Wie gefällt euch der Text?
länger geschriebene Wörter werden lang gesungen, ihr wisst schon und die punkte sind kurze Pausen!
Danke schonmal!
--- Melodie I ---
Anybody knew the emotion
Nobody listen to you,
You feel bad and blue
But you ever know
Somewhere along the way
You will be accepted
--- Melodie II ---
Remember always in the past
As everything you did was fun
The time you spent gone too fast
The time you spent gone too faaaast
--- Refrain ---
|:I always look on
The bright side of life
My friendships rife
I always enjoy my time
Because I love mine:|
I have second thoughts
If my live is correct
I feel not certain
If I should change that
I feel worry and sad
Im sure it is not bad
.it is not baaaaad
--- Melodie II ---
Remember always in the past
As everything you did was fun
The time you spent gone too fast
The time you spent gone too faaaast
--- Refrain ---
|:I always look on
The bright side of life
My friendships rife
I always enjoy my time
Because I love mine:|
länger geschriebene Wörter werden lang gesungen, ihr wisst schon und die punkte sind kurze Pausen!
Danke schonmal!
--- Melodie I ---
Anybody knew the emotion
Nobody listen to you,
You feel bad and blue
But you ever know
Somewhere along the way
You will be accepted
--- Melodie II ---
Remember always in the past
As everything you did was fun
The time you spent gone too fast
The time you spent gone too faaaast
--- Refrain ---
|:I always look on
The bright side of life
My friendships rife
I always enjoy my time
Because I love mine:|
I have second thoughts
If my live is correct
I feel not certain
If I should change that
I feel worry and sad
Im sure it is not bad
.it is not baaaaad
--- Melodie II ---
Remember always in the past
As everything you did was fun
The time you spent gone too fast
The time you spent gone too faaaast
--- Refrain ---
|:I always look on
The bright side of life
My friendships rife
I always enjoy my time
Because I love mine:|
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