01- That's ma Life - Flowar

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  1. Flowar

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    hier mal mein ganzer Part..bitte ma bewerten aber nich so ist scheiße dan sat warum und wo genau danke

    [Strophe]
    It was in Poland as I woke up one coldly night-
    hours just silence but then I saw some blue lights-
    I was shoked cause I neva saw an arrest before-
    police arrested that G, for them it was a Top Score-
    there's real G there's real ghetto life-
    for me its now daily but in that year I was just 5-

    1 Evening somebody knocked at ma room-
    and opened it and shit ...I see tha Gun and Bum-
    Those 2 Lines were just a dream-
    but the other things are real man you can believe me-
    there was this guy, he want to teach me how I have to be-
    but I ***** him up, and than I was running down the Street-
    yeah I will remeber that 4 ever for me-
    c'mon and listen to ma story-

    [Hook]

    You don't know how the Time fly?
    I know it as ma grandpa died
    3 years ago and I was standing there
    then I was thinking that's ma Life man

    OG and me had some good times
    I'm gonna tell you that in Rhymes
    I didn't gone crazy as he was away
    cause I know we'll meet us at a day

    [Strophe]
    yeah I am that boy who did not have this AE Slang-
    but I don't give a **** cause I am homy what I am-
    I'm not this ghetto kid wich everbody wanna see-
    but yeah that's right all my time this life wasn't so easy-
    I came into the school and ya all laughed me out-
    that I am different but ya know what? I have proud-

    I beat you up and for sure you wouldn't get mercy-
    here ist the garantie-
    And I dont care if your name is Percy-
    if you're rich and never make your fingers dirty-
    you can be 16teen but I am just 13teen-
    yo haters, hate me cause I want to get on the top-
    you heared west,east,north or south you can't say now stop-
    I make noise here, so what you wanna do now`?
    do you wanna go to the neighbour and say he is to loud-
    NDG is the next boy so you know what ***** Im out!

    [Hook]

    You don't know how the Time fly?
    I know it as ma grandpa died
    3 years ago and I was standing there
    then I was thinking that's ma Life man

    OG and me had some good times
    I'm gonna tell you that in Rhymes
    I didn't gone crazy as he was away
    cause I know we'll meet us at a day
     
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    m.E. ist entscheidend, dass du den Text jetzt gut auf einen passenden Beat rappst und das ganze gut abmischst.
     
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    was bedeutet das m.E.
     
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    meines Erachtens
     
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    aso also gefällt er dir?
     
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