A human thing

von Ruttma, 19.02.07.

  1. Ruttma

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    So, lange ist es her, aber da bin ich wieder und mal wieder mit einem Lied über die Menschen in meiner Umgebung, mit denen ich grade zu tun habe. Ein großer Teil davon hat grade ziemlichen Mist gebaut und darum gehts auch im Großem und Ganzem.

    Vers

    What the hell is going on, in the sub consciousness of men?
    What’s the use of a disguise, if people lie as much as they can?
    Sad that I can see straight through you, and I see, that there still are lies!

    Bridge

    Hold on, stop! I want to know the truth!
    Just one word! Tell your story now!

    Vers
    Why the hell do people never know when it’s enough?
    They drink and drink and still they drink, they pretend to be tough…
    Their sight starts to fade, their limbs become weak…
    I guess that’s the final stage, an alcoholic seek.


    Bridge

    Puke it out! Feel the illness of your deeds!
    Kill your mind! Let the poison spread!


    Refrain

    It’s human to do failures, but for them we must stand!
    You can’t run away, you can’t hide!
    No, you must fight! Fight to regain your pride!


    Vers

    They try to argue for a truth, that doesn’t even exist.
    They try to hide the clues, but there's a lot they've missed.
    If there was a reason, I will find it because of this abuse.


    Bridge

    Shut your mouth! Stop telling lies to me!
    Tell the truth! This chapter must end!


    Refrain

    It’s human to do failures, but for them we must stand!
    You can’t run away, you can’t hide!
    No, you must fight! Fight to regain your pride!


    It's human to do failures, but for them we must stand!
    You wont accept it? Then you pay!
    You cant get out? Then you lost your play!
     
  2. desgraca

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    Erstellt: 19.02.07   #2
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    What the hell is going on, in the sub consciousness of men?
    What’s the use of a disguise, if people lie as much as they can?
    Sad that I can see straight through you, and I see, that there still are lies!
    komma wech, evtl. that weg

    Bridge

    Hold on, stop! I want to know the truth!
    Just one word! Tell your story now!

    Vers
    Why the hell do people never know when it’s enough?
    They drink and drink and still they drink, they pretend to be tough…
    Their sight starts to fade, their limbs become weak…
    I guess that’s the final stage, an alcoholic seek.


    Bridge

    Puke it out! Feel the illness of your deeds!
    Kill your mind! Let the poison spread!


    Refrain

    It’s human to do failures, but for them we must stand!
    make mistakes, make/commit failures, failures aber unüblich
    You can’t run away, you can’t hide!
    No, you must fight! Fight to regain your pride!


    Vers

    They try to argue for a truth, that doesn’t even exist.
    They try to hide the clues, but there's a lot they've missed.
    If there was a reason, I will find it because of this abuse.


    Bridge

    Shut your mouth! Stop telling lies to me!
    Tell the truth! This chapter must end!


    Refrain

    It’s human to do failures, but for them we must stand!
    You can’t run away, you can’t hide!
    No, you must fight! Fight to regain your pride!


    It's human to do failures, but for them we must stand!
    You wont accept it? Then you pay!
    You cant get out? Then you lost your play!
    play,,,,,is hier schlecht,,,,match oder game, leider, da es dir den reim zerschießt


    gefällt mir passagenweise sehr gut, nur den refrain find ich doof,,,
     
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    Erstellt: 19.02.07   #3
    Vers

    What the hell is going on, in the sub consciousness of men?
    What’s the use of a disguise, if people lie as much as they can?
    Sad that I can see straight through you, and I see, that there still are lies!

    Bridge

    Hold on, stop! I want to know the truth!
    Just one word! Tell your story now!

    Vers
    Why the hell do people never know when it’s enough?
    They drink and drink and still they drink, they pretend to be tough…
    Their sight starts to fade, their limbs become weak…
    I guess that’s the final stage, an alcoholic seek.


    Bridge

    Puke it out! Feel the illness of your deeds!
    Kill your mind! Let the poison spread!


    Refrain

    It’s human to do failures, but for them we must stand!
    You can’t run away, you can’t hide!
    No, you must fight! Fight to regain your pride!
    Ich mag den Refrain net besonders....
    Ich wag mal nen Versuch...
    You can't run away, you can't hide
    your faults will follow
    so stop running
    regain your pride

    Vers

    They try to argue for a truth, that doesn’t even exist.
    They try to hide the clues, but there's a lot they've missed.
    If there was a reason, I will find it because of this abuse.


    Bridge

    Shut your mouth! Stop telling lies to me!
    Tell the truth! This chapter must end!


    Refrain

    It’s human to do failures, but for them we must stand!
    You can’t run away, you can’t hide!
    No, you must fight! Fight to regain your pride!


    It's human to do failures, but for them we must stand!
    You wont accept it? Then you pay!
    You cant get out? Then you lost your play!
     
  4. Ruttma

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    Erstellt: 19.02.07   #4
    Vers

    What the hell is going on, in the sub consciousness of men?
    What’s the use of a disguise, if people lie as much as they can?
    Sad that I can see straight through you, and I see that there still are lies!
    komma wech, evtl. that weg


    Bridge

    Hold on, stop! I want to know the truth!
    Just one word! Tell your story now!

    Vers
    Why the hell do people never know when it’s enough?
    They drink and drink and still they drink, they pretend to be tough…
    Their sight starts to fade, their limbs become weak…
    I guess that’s the final stage, an alcoholic seek.


    Bridge

    Puke it out! Feel the illness of your deeds!
    Kill your mind! Let the poison spread!


    Refrain

    It’s human to do mistakes, but for them we must stand!
    You can’t run away, you can’t hide!
    No, you must fight! Fight to regain your pride!
    Ich mag den Refrain net besonders....
    Ich wag mal nen Versuch...
    You can't run away, you can't hide
    your faults will follow
    so stop running
    regain your pride
    Der Refrain gefiel mir bisher auch noch nicht so gut, aber mir wollte auch nichts einfallen auf die Schnelle. Ich denk mir dazu noch was aus.

    Vers

    They try to argue for a truth, that doesn’t even exist.
    They try to hide the clues, but there's a lot they've missed.
    If there was a reason, I will find it because of this abuse.


    Bridge

    Shut your mouth! Stop telling lies to me!
    Tell the truth! This chapter must end!


    Refrain

    It’s human to do mistakes, but for them we must stand!
    You can’t run away, you can’t hide!
    No, you must fight! Fight to regain your pride!


    It's human to do failures, but for them we must stand!
    You wont accept it? Then you pay!
    You cant get out? This is your judgement day!

    play,,,,,is hier schlecht,,,,match oder game, leider, da es dir den reim zerschießt
    Habe da ne Alternative.
     
  5. Ruttma

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    Erstellt: 22.02.07   #5
    So, ich habe noch mal ein bischen was überarbeitet, vor allem aber habe ich den Refrain neu geschrieben (finde den eigendlich ganz gut *selbstbeweihräucherung* :D ). Bin mal gespannt was ihr hierzu nun sagt.

    Vers

    What the hell is going on, in the sub consciousness of men?
    What’s the use of a disguise, if you lie as much as you can?
    Sad that I can see straight through you, and I see that there still are lies!


    Bridge
    Hold on, stop! I want to know the truth!
    Just one word! Tell your story now!

    Vers
    Why the hell do people never know when it’s enough?
    They drink and drink and still they drink, they pretend to be tough
    Their sight starts to fade, their limbs become weak
    I guess that’s the final stage, an alcoholic seek.


    Bridge
    Puke it out! Feel the illness of your deeds!
    Kill your mind! Let the poison spread!


    Refrain
    There are rumors running through your head
    You dont know where they'r from but they make you more than mad
    You had this shit once before, you ignored with the thought "what for?"
    Now theiy'r on the loose again, now let me see, what you still can!



    Vers
    You try to argue for a truth, that doesn’t even exist.
    You try to hide the clues, but there's a lot you've missed.
    If there was a reason, I will find it because of this abuse.


    Bridge
    Shut your mouth! Stop telling lies to me!
    Tell the truth! This chapter must end!

    Refrain
    There are rumors running through your head
    You dont know where they'r from but they make you more than mad
    You had this shit once before, you ignored with the thought "what for?"
    Now theiy'r on the loose again, now let me see, what you still can!


    There are rumors running through your head
    And your feel the incomming dread, because you know that they'll spread
    You've become a victim once again, you feel like somethings' blowing your brain
    But now its payback time, you will wash away this grime.
     
  6. Ruttma

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    Erstellt: 25.02.07   #6
    Hat keiner was zu dem neuen Refrain zu sagen, nachdem sie über ihm gemeckert haben? :confused:
    Und sowieso wäre ich über noch ein paar Meinung glücklich. :)
     
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    Erstellt: 25.02.07   #7
    äh,,,yoah, der neue refrain:

    Refrain
    There are rumors running through your head
    You dont know where they're from but they make you more than mad
    You had this shit once before, you ignored it with the thought "what for?"
    Now they're on the loose again, now let me see, what you still can!
    "what you still can" gibt es nicht.
    müsste hin "what you can still do"

     
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    Erstellt: 25.02.07   #8
    und hier:

    There are rumors running through your head
    And your feel the incomming dread, because you know that they'll spread
    wer ist they?
    You've become a victim once again, you feel like somethings' blowing your brain
    ähm, blowing your brain up/out........oder soll das ne sexuelle anspielung sein? :confused: falls ja, dann -blowing+fucking :D
    But now its payback time, you will wash away this grime
     
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    Erstellt: 25.02.07   #9

    There are rumors running through your head
    And your feel the incomming dread, because you know that they'll spread
    wer ist they? They sind die Rumors
    You've become a victim once again, you feel like somethings' blowing up your brain
    ähm, blowing your brain up/out........oder soll das ne sexuelle anspielung sein? :confused: falls ja, dann -blowing+fucking :D Nein, es soll heißen: "es fühlt sich an, als würde etwas dein Hirn sprengen" :p
    But now its payback time, you will wash away this grime

    Refrain
    There are rumors running through your head
    You dont know where they're from but they make you more than mad
    You had this shit once before, you ignored it with the thought "what for?"
    Now they're on the loose again, now let me see, what you still can do!
    "what you still can" gibt es nicht.
    müsste hin "what you can still do
    Klingt auch bischen blöde..Da soll hallt stehen " lass mich sehen, was du noch machen kannst" Da fehlt wohl noch nen "do", stimmt.


     
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    ähm, blowing your brain up/out........oder soll das ne sexuelle anspielung sein? :confused: falls ja, dann -blowing+fucking :D Nein, es soll heißen: "es fühlt sich an, als würde etwas dein Hirn sprengen" :p

    yoah dann vorderes :D
     
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