DT-Ride out

[Flowar]

HEy was geht,

Ich bräuchte mal wieder Kritik zu einem Text:

lets ride out,C'mon girl get in that bentley/
21 inch steel rimes,you know I care you gently/
its permanently same,we both try get into the game/
we aint no ghostwriters,killas,but special man/
now you're the main event,I ride by witha gang/
now watches the whole pent,we just doing legal thangs/
Is it so suspect when a boy witha cap drives benz/
Is it so suspect when a G' throw stackz with his hands/
(YES IT IS)
prejudice,we'll the buis,is it for ya to heavy shit/
cant handle this?I knew it bitch,come get away snitch/
Im just a level to high my medi is ya maximum/
C'mon lets go on a ride,and you can ask them/
them ones who loves hating myself,the way I record/
ladys like it smooth,not so gangster way,shhh uhhh/
Im spittin truth,this fingers writin intelligence/
ballerholic? Yes I am,I fight for fame still ex violence/

ist ein part..aber würde mal gerne was dazu hören..dankeschon mal

 

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