going home

[Zündapp]

Hallo Leute,

mir ist da mal wieder Wirres Zeug :screwy: in den Kopf gekommen. Ich lasse die Story mal unkommentiert und hoffe der Inhalt kommt rüber. Was das englisch angeht, sofern man überhaupt den Sinn erkennt, bitte ich die üblichen Verdächtigen um konstruktive Kritik.

Danke schonmal im Voraus

Zündapp

4 akkorde a la bob dylan, A- Gitarre

going home

well I am feeling blue
sitting at the bar and lights fading out
its 5 am
drinks leading me to memories
hell of bad pictures
I know it is better to leave
but someone said "take some more and stay";
but I better go home

yeah I should better go home now
I want to go home
but I blazed up my brain and it burns
I want to go home

well my head is still aching
and I feel the things
I feel the things
that I can't get over
and nobody knows
that I feel torn into peaces
cause I'm still smiling
but I want to go home

yeah I should better go home now
I want to go home
but I blazed my brain and it burns
I want to go home

the river runs still
a flow of dirt prickle like Champaign
no way to get over
of that feeling I did something wrong
why haven't I left
left all of it and went home
cause I feel a little like home
but now I go home

yeah I go home now
I want to go home
and never
join that place again
cause I found my place to be


edit: es sind 7 akkorde geworden ;-)

 

[desgraca]

going home

well I am feeling blue
sitting at the bar and lights fading out
its 5 am
drinks leading me to memories
hell of bad pictures
I know it is better to leave
but someone said “take some more and stay”
have some more
but I better go home
i'd better

yeah I should better go home now
I want to go home
but I blazed up my brain and it burns
but i blazed my brain up (auch wenn mir die begrifflichkeit fremd is )
I want to go home

well my head is still aching
and I feel the things
I feel the things
that I can’t get over
and nobody knows
that I feel torn into peaces
cause I’m still smiling
but I want to go home

yeah I should better go home now
I want to go home
but I blazed my brain and it burns
I want to go home

the river runs still
a flow of dirt prickle like Champaign
sparkles/sparkling like champaign
no way to get over
of that feeling I did something wrong
-of
why haven’t I left
left all of it and went home
gone home
cause I feel a little like home
but know I go home
unverständliche zeile

yeah I go home now
I want to go home
and never
join that place again
cause I found my place to be




fands verständlich...

 

[Zündapp]

Viel Dank Nate ;-)

noch weitere Kommentare??


update

going home

well I am feeling blue
sitting at the bar and lights fading out
its 5 am
drinks leading me to memories
hell of bad pictures
I know it is better to leave
but someone said "have some more and stay";
but I'd better go home

yeah I should better go home now
I want to go home
but I blazed my brain up and it burns
I want to go home

well my head is still aching
and I feel the things
I feel the things
that I can't get over
and nobody knows
that I feel torn into peaces
cause I'm still smiling
but I want to go home

yeah I should better go home now
I want to go home
but I blazed my brain and it burns (mir auch nicht, aber ich dachte burn und blaze, das passt irgendwie
I want to go home

the river runs still
a flow of dirt sparkling like Champaign
no way to get over.......
get over that feeling I did something wrong
why haven't I left
left all of it and gone home
cause I feel a little like home
but now I will go home (da hatte sich ein k eingeschlichen)

yeah I go home now
I want to go home
and never
join that place again
cause I found my place to be

 

[knoopas]

ja, gefällt mir.

Musste zwar ab und zu an go home von Michel Buble (?) denken, aber auch nur, weil ich von dem lied nur das wanne go home im kopf hab

Schöner text!!

 

[donay]

hmm, ich hätte da am englishen noch einige änderungen gemacht, aber wenn nate sagt es stimme so, dann wirds wohl so sein

 

[Zündapp]

hmm, ich hätte da am englishen noch einige änderungen gemacht, aber wenn nate sagt es stimme so, dann wirds wohl so sein

@ donay
Immer her mit den Vorschlägen.


vieleicht hat Wilbour ja noch Zeit mal ein bischen drüber zu schauen.

Danke Knoopas
der song von buble (oder wie man das schreibt) hat aber auch gar nichts mit dem going home von Zündapp zu tun. ;-)

 

[donay]

gehe trozdem noch kurz drüber.. evtl lern ich selbst ja was dabei
going home

well I am feeling blue
sitting at the bar and the lights are fading out
it's 5 am
drinks leading me to memories
a hell of bad pictures
I know it is better to leave
but someone says “have some more and stay”
but I’d better go home

yeah I should better go home now
I want to go home
but I blazed my brain up and it burns
I want to go home

well my head is still aching
and I feel the things
I feel the things
that I can’t get overnananaa, sehr unlyrisch dünken mich die ganze zeilen hier...
and nobody knows
that I feel torn into peaces
cause i still smile
but I want to go home

yeah I should better go home by now das by müsste dann natürlich in rjedem refrain sein. aber das ist ja ne lyrische sache...
I want to go home
but I blazed my brain and it burns (mir auch nicht, aber ich dachte burn und blaze, das passt irgendwie
I want to go home

the river runs still vileicht tranquille, oder silent, oder so was?
a flow of dirt sparkling like Champaign
no way to get over.......
no way to pass by
pass by the feeling I did something wrong grammatik?
why haven’t I left already years ago
left all of it and gone home
cause I feel a little like home
but now i'm going home

yeah I go home now
I want to go home
and never
join that place again
because I found my place to be



nimm was passt, und lass es gegebenfalls nochmals von einem native überfliegen, da es gut sein kann, dass meine ändeurngen ncihta lle richtig sind... das ganze bekam natürlich einen kleinen andren sinn, vom nachhause gehen der bar hin zum nachhause gehen, weg von der ganzen welt, oder einfach das zuhause...

 

[x-Riff]

Ja wenn das so ist, dann mach ich auch noch mal ein paar Anmerkungen zum Text/zur Sprache:

going home

well I am feeling blue
sitting at the bar and lights fading out
sitting i a bar, light´s fading out
its 5 am
drinks leading me to memories
a hell of bad pictures
I know it is better to leave
but someone said "have some more and stay";
but I'd better go home

yeah I should better go home now
I want to go home
but I blazed my brain up and it burns
I want to go home

well my head is still aching
and I feel the things
I feel the things
that I can't get over
things und that finde ich nicht sooo toll, vlt: feel everything / I can´t overcome oder so
and nobody knows
that I feel torn into peaces
cause I'm still smiling
but I want to go home

yeah I should better go home now
I want to go home
but I blazed my brain and it burns (mir auch nicht, aber ich dachte burn und blaze, das passt irgendwie
I want to go home

the river runs still
the river´s still flowing/running
a flow of dirt sparkling like Champaign
no way to get over.......
get over that feeling I did something wrong
get over the feeling of having done something wrong
why haven't I left
left all of it and gone home
left all behind and went home
cause I feel a little like home
but now I will go home (da hatte sich ein k eingeschlichen)

yeah I go home now
I want to go home
and never
join that place again
come back to that place again
cause I found my place to be
cause I found the place (worth) to stay

So schrecklich wirr finde ich den gar nicht, den Text.
Gibt jedenfalls gut wieder was einem so um 5 Uhr angesäuselt durch die Birne rauscht ...

x-Riff

 

[Zündapp]

Hallo und vielen Dank X-Riff,


lol.... angesäuselt ist gut. der typ soll eigentlich zugedröhnt sein, unter anderem, und vor allem auch, von und mit alkoholfreien "stimulierenden Mitteln"

Die Aelteren unter euch wissen was ich meine ;-))))

Greets

Zündapp

 

[x-Riff]

"everybody must get stoned" Bob Dylan

 

[Zündapp]

edit........ sorry für den post.