it feels right

[PianoObsession]

Hallo,

Ich bin 19 jahre, Saänger und auch songwriter und würde gerne eure meinung zu meiner gerade spontan geschrieben lyric anhören.

vielen dank !



Verse.1
We were 16 years old and probably you remember me
I had been thinking my obsession wont never let me leave
Once you were my greatest dream, but it doesn't matter anymore
Let me tell you this, I can be your friend or your lover like years before
Youre just a girl who got a great booty
Likes to get drunk by Bacardi
Wears bracelets, caps and hoody,
And loves to being naughty
wait ive been noticing that's really immature
but so am I, and Id love to mess with you and that's for sure

Hook.
please ive been growing up and you need to respect me
I realized that theres alota other girls like you whos sexy and smoking weed
Money make you cum, isn't it right
Ill pay you sum euro, and youre gonna have sex with me, aiight`?


2ontite lets have sex, baby it feels so right
All the humiliation you did to me, im gonna make you cry
Don't act like youd being shy, cry baby, it feels so right
Damn !