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[samsa]

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My Dear xxxxx
I thought i've got to show You
How I do feel - feel about You
And I swear this is true

You are more than just one ordinary girl
to me .. I don't know You for long
But I feel more than any time before
'bout You .. I hope You understand

This Song's for You
please know I do like You
even more than friends do
And it would be unbelievable if You'd do, too
About me, me, lonely and boring guy..

First time I saw You
was like I could'nt believe you're real
And from that moment on I feel what I do feel
Your glances are like a imbuing feel, It's real

Your smile is like a sunshine though a thunderstorm
Without You all of it, whole world, would be forlorn
Seeing You laugh makes me feel a rush of endorphin
And I tell You, I would do anything to make Your life clean

This Song's for You
please know I do like You
even more than friends do
And it would be unbelievable if You'd do, too
About me, me, lonely and boring guy..

I really wish You like this proof of sympathy from me to You
And I would'nt wish anything harder than You'd like me too
Please. Helena, give this all a listen, what I tell You It's true
Oh, what I tell You is true - tell me, can it be that I'm really in love with You?

Yes, I guess.
I am In love with You.

 

[wilbour-cobb]

wie findet ihr den song ist von einem Bekannten
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schöner text, es sind ein paar sprachliche ungenauigkeiten drin, kannste deinem kumpel ja mal durch die blume erzählen

My Dear xxxxx
I thought i've got to show You
How I do feel - feel about You
And I swear this is true

You are more than just one ordinary girl
to me .. I don't know You for long
But I feel more than any time before
'bout You .. I hope You understand

This Song's for You
please know I do like You
even more than friends do
And it would be unbelievable if You'd do, too
das "would" ist da eigentlich überflüssig, es ist sogar ein bisschen falsch
About me, me, lonely and boring guy..
da muss ein artikel vor, "the lonely..." oder "a lonely.."

First time I saw You
was like I could'nt believe you're real
And from that moment on I feel what I do feel
hier nimmt man "this"
Your glances are like a imbuing feel, It's real
"feel" ist nur das verb, "feeling" ist das nomen

Your smile is like a sunshine through a thunderstorm
hier dafür kein artikel, "..is like sunshine"
Without You all of it, whole world, would be forlorn
der satz ist etwas verdreht und ergibt keinen richtigen sinn. vielleicht besser so: "without you everything, the whole world, would be forlorn"
Seeing You laugh makes me feel a rush of endorphin
das ist auch etwas hakleig, "makes me feel" würde man da so nicht nehmen, entweder "seeing you laugh feels like a rush of endorphines" oder "seeing you laugh makes me feel like rushing endorphine". dieses "like" ist immer ein vergleich, keine beschreibung
And I tell You, I would do anything to make Your life clean

This Song's for You
please know I do like You
even more than friends do
And it would be unbelievable if You'd do, too
About me, me, lonely and boring guy..

I really wish You like this proof of sympathy from me to You
And I wouldn't wish anything harder than You'd like me too
hier würde man "anything better" nehmen
Please. Helena (oha!), give this all a listen, what I tell You It's true
"give it a listen" und "what I tell you is true"
Oh, what I tell You is true - tell me, can it be that I'm really in love with You?
das "that" besser raus

Yes, I guess.
I am In love with You.