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  1. samsa

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    Erstellt: 22.08.07   #1
    wie findet ihr den song ist von einem Bekannten
    geschrieben

    My Dear xxxxx
    I thought i've got to show You
    How I do feel - feel about You
    And I swear this is true

    You are more than just one ordinary girl
    to me .. I don't know You for long
    But I feel more than any time before
    'bout You .. I hope You understand

    This Song's for You
    please know I do like You
    even more than friends do
    And it would be unbelievable if You'd do, too
    About me, me, lonely and boring guy..

    First time I saw You
    was like I could'nt believe you're real
    And from that moment on I feel what I do feel
    Your glances are like a imbuing feel, It's real

    Your smile is like a sunshine though a thunderstorm
    Without You all of it, whole world, would be forlorn
    Seeing You laugh makes me feel a rush of endorphin
    And I tell You, I would do anything to make Your life clean

    This Song's for You
    please know I do like You
    even more than friends do
    And it would be unbelievable if You'd do, too
    About me, me, lonely and boring guy..

    I really wish You like this proof of sympathy from me to You
    And I would'nt wish anything harder than You'd like me too
    Please. Helena, give this all a listen, what I tell You It's true
    Oh, what I tell You is true - tell me, can it be that I'm really in love with You?

    Yes, I guess.
    I am In love with You.
     
  2. wilbour-cobb

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    Erstellt: 22.08.07   #2
    schöner text, es sind ein paar sprachliche ungenauigkeiten drin, kannste deinem kumpel ja mal durch die blume erzählen

    My Dear xxxxx
    I thought i've got to show You
    How I do feel - feel about You
    And I swear this is true

    You are more than just one ordinary girl
    to me .. I don't know You for long
    But I feel more than any time before
    'bout You .. I hope You understand

    This Song's for You
    please know I do like You
    even more than friends do
    And it would be unbelievable if You'd do, too
    das "would" ist da eigentlich überflüssig, es ist sogar ein bisschen falsch
    About me, me, lonely and boring guy..
    da muss ein artikel vor, "the lonely..." oder "a lonely.."

    First time I saw You
    was like I could'nt believe you're real
    And from that moment on I feel what I do feel
    hier nimmt man "this"
    Your glances are like a imbuing feel, It's real
    "feel" ist nur das verb, "feeling" ist das nomen

    Your smile is like a sunshine through a thunderstorm
    hier dafür kein artikel, "..is like sunshine"
    Without You all of it, whole world, would be forlorn
    der satz ist etwas verdreht und ergibt keinen richtigen sinn. vielleicht besser so: "without you everything, the whole world, would be forlorn"
    Seeing You laugh makes me feel a rush of endorphin
    das ist auch etwas hakleig, "makes me feel" würde man da so nicht nehmen, entweder "seeing you laugh feels like a rush of endorphines" oder "seeing you laugh makes me feel like rushing endorphine". dieses "like" ist immer ein vergleich, keine beschreibung
    And I tell You, I would do anything to make Your life clean

    This Song's for You
    please know I do like You
    even more than friends do
    And it would be unbelievable if You'd do, too
    About me, me, lonely and boring guy..

    I really wish You like this proof of sympathy from me to You
    And I wouldn't wish anything harder than You'd like me too
    hier würde man "anything better" nehmen
    Please. Helena (oha!), give this all a listen, what I tell You It's true
    "give it a listen" und "what I tell you is true"
    Oh, what I tell You is true - tell me, can it be that I'm really in love with You?
    das "that" besser raus

    Yes, I guess.
    I am In love with You.
     
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