May your spirit live Forever

[wallabie]

So, ich poste jetzt auch einmal einen Text und würde mich über Anregungen freuen. Der Text ist auf Englisch.
Ich habe schon Musik dazu komponiert, eher ruhiger. Im Refrain brauch ich auf jeden Fall eine Sitar...


May Your Spirit Live Forever


(v1)
In this lonely world so full of pain
Many with more than they need complain
While little babies die of hunger
And so few people stop to wonder
As homeless lie 'neath bridges at night
It might be real but it is not right
I become more fearful with each new day
Sometimes I just sit down and start to pray


Chorus
Jay Guru Deva
Hare Krishna, om, Hare Hare
Jay Guru Deva
May your spirit live forever

(v2)
As I walked along the riverside
I saw a girl who quietly cried
She'd sold her body the night before
And felt she'd be lost forevermore
She sat huddled, pale, and all alone
Without a friend and without a home
I held her close to me, on this whole day
And then I just taught her, how she should pray

Chorus
Jay Guru Deva
Hare Krishna, om, Hare Hare
Jay Guru Deva
May your spirit live forever

Bridge
He said, I'll heal this world, soon you will see
Just bring all of the lonely souls to me
And the world's become empty now he's gone
Though in our prayers his spirit lives on

Jai Guru Deva
Hare Krishna, om Hare Hare
Jai Guru Deva
May the spirit life forever