[post-hardcore] blur me.. durchlauf der gefühle, brauche feedback // korrekturlesung

von dave1, 04.11.07.

  1. dave1

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    mirror, mirror
    can't you tell me
    where I left my real
    how did i do all that sins come true..
    why this reflection of me
    just hangs up and disappears in front of me?
    mirror, mirror
    can't you show me which way to go?

    and I've sold my soul
    just to see you scream, see you scream
    look into the mirror once again..
    show me your fuckin real!
    but your vistas are scaring me.. to death..
    mirror, mirror
    can't you make me free, free from.. her

    whashed out, blurred, shot down and blinded me!
    the way i wanted to go..
    broke in two!
    why did you split my choice?
    not that i know of
    which step would be the next i should make?
    shall i go?
    shall i do?

    and I've sold my soul
    just to see you scream, see you scream
    look into the mirror once again..
    show me your fuckin real!
    but your vistas are scaring me.. to death..
    mirror, mirror
    can't you make me free, free from.. her

    this is my mirage of you!
    that's how i want you to be
    kneel down!
    kneel down in front of me
    now, it's time for you to obey my voice!
    blur my mind!
    you know it!
    i'll learn it!
    i'll never be the same!
     
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    mirror, mirror
    can't you tell me
    where I left my real
    how did i do all that sins come true..
    make all these sins come true
    why this reflection of me
    why does this reflektion of me
    just hang and disappear in front of me

    just hangs up and disappears in front of me?
    mirror, mirror
    can't you show me which way to go?

    and I've sold my soul
    just to see you scream, see you scream
    hear you scream macht irgendwie mehr sinn find ich
    look into the mirror once again..
    show me your fuckin real!
    but your vistas are scaring me.. to death..
    mirror, mirror
    can't you make me free, free from.. her
    free of her

    whashed out, blurred, shot down and blinded me!
    the way i wanted to go..
    broke in two!
    in half
    why did you split my choice?
    not that i know of
    ohne "of"
    which step would be the next i should make?
    shall i go?
    shall i do?
    "soll ich tun?"

    and I've sold my soul
    just to see you scream, see you scream
    look into the mirror once again..
    show me your fuckin real!
    but your vistas are scaring me.. to death..
    mirror, mirror
    can't you make me free, free from.. her

    this is my mirage of you!
    that's how i want you to be
    kneel down!
    kneel down in front of me
    now, it's time for you to obey my voice!
    blur my mind!
    you know it!
    i'll learn it!
    i'll never be the same![/QUOTE]
     
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