[post-hardcore] blur me.. durchlauf der gefühle, brauche feedback // korrekturlesung

[dave1]

mirror, mirror
can't you tell me
where I left my real
how did i do all that sins come true..
why this reflection of me
just hangs up and disappears in front of me?
mirror, mirror
can't you show me which way to go?

and I've sold my soul
just to see you scream, see you scream
look into the mirror once again..
show me your fuckin real!
but your vistas are scaring me.. to death..
mirror, mirror
can't you make me free, free from.. her

whashed out, blurred, shot down and blinded me!
the way i wanted to go..
broke in two!
why did you split my choice?
not that i know of
which step would be the next i should make?
shall i go?
shall i do?

and I've sold my soul
just to see you scream, see you scream
look into the mirror once again..
show me your fuckin real!
but your vistas are scaring me.. to death..
mirror, mirror
can't you make me free, free from.. her

this is my mirage of you!
that's how i want you to be
kneel down!
kneel down in front of me
now, it's time for you to obey my voice!
blur my mind!
you know it!
i'll learn it!
i'll never be the same!

 

[desgraca]

feedbackkorrekturlesung:

mirror, mirror
can't you tell me
where I left my real
how did i do all that sins come true..
make all these sins come true
why this reflection of me
why does this reflektion of me
just hang and disappear in front of me
just hangs up and disappears in front of me?
mirror, mirror
can't you show me which way to go?

and I've sold my soul
just to see you scream, see you scream
hear you scream macht irgendwie mehr sinn find ich
look into the mirror once again..
show me your fuckin real!
but your vistas are scaring me.. to death..
mirror, mirror
can't you make me free, free from.. her
free of her

whashed out, blurred, shot down and blinded me!
the way i wanted to go..
broke in two!
in half
why did you split my choice?
not that i know of
ohne "of"
which step would be the next i should make?
shall i go?
shall i do?
"soll ich tun?"

and I've sold my soul
just to see you scream, see you scream
look into the mirror once again..
show me your fuckin real!
but your vistas are scaring me.. to death..
mirror, mirror
can't you make me free, free from.. her

this is my mirage of you!
that's how i want you to be
kneel down!
kneel down in front of me
now, it's time for you to obey my voice!
blur my mind!
you know it!
i'll learn it!
i'll never be the same![/QUOTE]