Sleeping between lions

von Officer Down, 16.04.08.

  1. Officer Down

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    Sleeping between Lions


    Bloodshot Eyes
    and seperated body parts
    fearfull nights
    and gunshots breaking silence
    Screaming Voices - in the Dark
    Seeing Humans - Suffocating - on their Blood

    In times - you have to fight
    Keep hold your head up high
    Be watchful towards your Enemies
    You already sleep between the - Lions

    See the world on its best
    Getting down ashamed
    Fights for Oil
    Money and Religion
    24/7 filled with lies
    War, pain, shame and hate

    In times - you have to fight
    Keep hold your head up high
    Be watchful towards your Enemies
    You already sleep between the - Lions

    Blinded through Money
    moving forward with rage
    Misbelieve is the engine
    cruel is its fuel
    and greed is the power
    that keep the beast moving

    In times - you have to fight
    Keep hold your head up high
    Be watchful towards your Enemies
    You already sleep between the - Lions

    All these wars
    streets filled with broken bodies
    senseless dying
    for things which doesnt care
    the human next to you
    can be your biggest enemy
    just for things which doesnt care at all

    In times - you have to fight
    Keep hold your head up high
    Be watchful towards your Enemies
    You already sleep between the - Lions
     
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    Bloodshot Eyes
    and seperated body parts
    da kommt man nicht auf menschen, ich muss an "sortierte karosserie teile" denken. Vielleicht sowas wie "ripped bodies" oder "torn bodies"?
    fearfull nights
    and gunshots breaking silence
    Screaming Voices - in the Dark
    Seeing Humans - Suffocating - on their Blood

    In times - you have to fight
    da sollte besser "in times like these" heissen. "in times" alleine sagt nichts aus.
    Keep hold your head up high
    keep your head hold up high
    Be watchful towards your Enemies
    You already sleep between the - Lions

    See the world on its best
    "at its best"
    Getting down ashamed
    Fights for Oil
    Money and Religion
    24/7 filled with lies
    War, pain, shame and hate
    hier ist schon klar was du ausdrücken willst, aber am englisch kann mna feilen. Ein "24/7" ist umgangssprachlich eher ein Laden. "lies througout the day" wäre deutlicher und eleganter. aber das ist eine frage des stils und nicht der grammatik

    In times - you have to fight
    Keep hold your head up high
    Be watchful towards your Enemies
    You already sleep between the - Lions

    Blinded through Money
    "blinded by"
    moving forward with rage
    Misbelieve is the engine
    cruel is its fuel
    "cruelty", "cruel" ist ein adjektiv
    and greed is the power
    that keep the beast moving

    In times - you have to fight
    Keep hold your head up high
    Be watchful towards your Enemies
    You already sleep between the - Lions

    All these wars
    streets filled with broken bodies
    senseless dying
    for things which doesnt care
    "..doesn't count" vielleicht eher. "doesn't care" meint, "...die sich nicht drum kümmern".
    the human next to you
    can be your biggest enemy
    "could be"
    just for things which doesnt care at all

    In times - you have to fight
    Keep hold your head up high
    Be watchful towards your Enemies
    You already sleep between the - Lions
     
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    ich seh meine leichten denk und rechtschreibschwächen.wo ist denn nur mein gutes schulenglisch hin mit all dem schönen zeug:) danke fürs checken

    so long
    gruss
    gruss
     
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