Tears Don't Lie

[G3!]

So mein 1. ich find ihn schrecklich aber ich brauche unbedingt einen text und hoffe hr könnt noch ein bischen was verbessern und habt noch tolle vorschläge zum überarbeiten

Tears don't Lie


refrain:

I've done something wrong
said sorry 'bout one thousand times
have you ever done
something wrong you regret
and gotten one more chance?
you called me a liar
but tears don't lie (tears don't lie)



Strophe 1:
i know that it was wrong
but people can change
5 years have past
i cried every single day
just wanted you to stay
tried to call you
without success


(Refrain)


Strophe2:
Do you know that i'm still in love with you
I thought about suicide
because it isn't worth to live
without you (without the girl i love)
this song is only one more apology
and the love letter to reach your heart



Please, please believe me tears don't lie (gesprochen)


(Refrain)



Tears Don't Lie and will never do...

So und nochmal einen den ich grad entworfen habe.
es ist eine ballade mit wenig text und ohne refrain

Accident

Everything happend on the 5. november.
It was a rainy day.
A day with a lot of blood and tears... (gesprochen *g*)^^

A young man
on the way to a friend
couldn't suspect that
it will be the last drive
it was rainy
this time

a car crash
that wasn't his fault
the culprit
was drunken
why does it always hit
the innocent people

i've lost my best friend

 

[FollowTheHollow]

So mein 1. ich find ihn schrecklich aber ich brauche unbedingt einen text und hoffe hr könnt noch ein bischen was verbessern und habt noch tolle vorschläge zum überarbeiten




Tears don't Lie


refrain:

I've done something wrong
said sorry 'bout one thousand times
have you ever done
something wrong you regret
and gotten one more chancevllt ein "?" dahin? für mich endet da der zusammenhängende satz, was danach kommt ist ja was anderes, oder?
you called me a liar
but tears don't lie (tears don't lie)



Strophe 1:
i know that it was wrong
but people can change
5 years have past
i cried every single day
just wanted you to stay
tried to call you - wenn ich das richtig verstehe, wolltest du sie wieder haben, vllt "recall" ? kommt dann mehr zum vorschein. oder wolltest du sie nur anrufen?
without success find ich ziemlich kurz, gewollt? "but there should be any success" oder sowas..vllt auch ne metapher, aber fällt mir grad nix ein.


(Refrain)


Strophe2:
Do you know that i'm still in love with you
I thought about suicide
because it isn't worth to live
without you (without the girl i love)würd ich nicht so einfach schreiben, vllt "because the sense of life has gone with you" oder sowas...mehr viel mir grad nicht ein
this song is only one more apology
and the love letter to reach your heart



Please, please believe me tears don't lie (gesprochen) mit der richtigen musik dazu kommt das bestimmt sehr geil


(Refrain)



Tears Don't Lie and will never do...

an englisch ist mir mal nix aufgefallen...

zum inhalt:

sie hat schluss gemacht, und nach 5 jahren liebst du sie immer noch?
ansonsten kannst du oben gucken, was ich verändern würd.

mfg
FtH

 

[desgraca]

Tears don't Lie


refrain:

I've done something wrong
said sorry 'bout one thousand times
have you ever done
something wrong you regret
and gotten one more chance
you called me a liar
but tears don't lie (tears don't lie)



Strophe 1:
i know that it was wrong
-that
but people can change
5 years have past
passed
i cried every single day
just wanted you to stay
tried to call you
without success
statt "wirthout success" sagt man "in vain"


(Refrain)


Strophe2:
Do you know that i'm still in love with you
I thought about suicide
because it isn't worth to live
because it (besser: life) is not worth living
without you (without the girl i love)
this song is only one more apology
and the love letter to reach your heart



Please, please believe me tears don't lie (gesprochen)


(Refrain)



Tears Don't Lie and will never do...




Accident

Everything happend on the 5. november.
It was a rainy day.
A day with a lot of blood and tears... (gesprochen *g*)^^

A young man
on the way to a friend
couldn't suspect that
it will be the last drive
would statt will
it was rainy
this time
that time

a car crash
that wasn't his fault
the culprit
was drunken
drunk
why does it always hit
the innocent people

i've lost my best friend