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[dr.note]

Mahlzeit!

Kann mir jemand helfen? Da mein Englisch nicht gut ist, diesen Text zu verbessern.

Danke und Gruß

Strophe:

I'll walk in the rain by your side
I'll fell to the warmth of your hand
I'll do anything to help you understand
I'll love you more than anybody can

Refrain 1:

And the wind will whisper your name to me
Little birds will sing along in time
The leaves will bow down when you walk by
and bells will ring

Solo:

Strophe:

I'll be there when you're feelin down
to kiss your tears away it you cry
I'll share with you all the happiness we'll find
A reflaction of the love in your eyes

Refrain 1:

And the wind will whisper your name to me
Little birds will sing along in time
The leaves will bow down when you walk by
and bells will ring

Refrain 2:

And i'll sing you the songs of the rainbow
the whisper of the day which is mine
The leaves will bow down when you walk by
and bells will ring

Ende:

and bells will ring
and bells will ring
and bells will ring

 

[moniaqua]

Hi dr.note,

es waer schlauer gewesen, Sprache und Titel des songs in das subject zu schreiben, s.a.
https://www.musiker-board.de/vb/songs-texte/55608-infos-den-songtexten.html

Ich schau mal, schick aber voraus, dass ich keine native bin:

I'll walk in the rain at your side
I'll fell to the warmth of your hand
I fall to the warmth of your hand or I feel the warmth of...?
I'll do everything to help you understand
I'll love you more than anybody can
you will? At the moment, you don't love her/him?

Refrain 1:

And the wind will whisper your name to me
Little birds will sing along in time
In time sagt mir hier nichts
The leaves will bow down when you walk by
and the bells will ring

Solo:

Strophe:

I'll be there when you're feeling down
to kiss your tears away if you cry
Ist es nicht when you cry?
I'll share with you all the happiness we'll find
A reflection of the love in your eyes

Refrain 1:

And the wind will whisper your name to me
Little birds will sing along in time
The leaves will bow down when you walk by
and bells will ring

Refrain 2:

And I'll sing to/for? you the songs of the rainbow
the whisper of the day which is mine
diese Zeile verstehe ich nicht
The leaves will bow down when you walk by
and bells will ring

Ende:

and bells will ring
and bells will ring
and bells will ring

 

[desgraca]

I'll walk in the rain by your side
I'll fell to the warmth of your hand
fall
I'll do anything to help you understand
I'll love you more than anybody can

Refrain 1:

And the wind will whisper your name to me
Little birds will sing along in time
The leaves will bow down when you walk by
and bells will ring

Solo:

Strophe:

I'll be there when you're feelin down
to kiss your tears away it you cry
if
I'll share with you all the happiness we'll find
A reflection of the love in your eyes


Refrain 1:

And the wind will whisper your name to me
Little birds will sing along in time
The leaves will bow down when you walk by
and bells will ring

Refrain 2:

And i'll sing you the songs of the rainbow
the whisper of the day which is mine
besser that statt which
The leaves will bow down when you walk by
and bells will ring

Ende:

and bells will ring
and bells will ring
and bells will ring[/QUOTE]


ich mag die stimmung deines texts und finde dein englisch nebenbei bemerkt nicht schlecht.

 

[peter55]

Hi dr.note,

ist der Text denn von dir???

Wenn ja, dann hast du aber sehr intensiv John Denver gehört:

For Baby (For Bobbie) - John Denver

I walk in the rain by your side
I cling to the warmth of your tiny hand
I´ll do anything help you understand
I love you more than anybody can

And the wind will whisper your name to me
Little birds will sing along in time
The leaves will bowl down when you walk by
And morning bells will chime

I´ll be there when you´re feelin´ down
To kiss away the tears that you´ve cried
I´ll share with you all the happiness I found
A reflection of the love in your eyes

And I´ll sing you the songs of a rainbow
Whisper of the joy that is mine
The leaves will bowl down when you walk by
And morning bells will chime

I walk in the rain by your side
I cling to the warmth of your tiny hand
I´ll do anything help you understand
I love you more than anybody can

And the wind will whisper your name to me
Little birds will sing along in time
The leaves will bowl down when you walk by
And morning bells will chime

sry....

Greetz

 

[desgraca]

roffel, ich liebe es

 

[peter55]

roffel, ich liebe es

... wenigstens hast du John Denvers gutes Englisch gelobt ...

 

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