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- 09.01.20
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- 02.04.09
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Hi,
ich bin als Gitarrist/Songwriter in einer Band tätig, nur habe ich bisher immer nur den musikalischen Teil unserer Songs geschriben, das hier ist mein erster Versuch selber einen Text zu schreiben ^^
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Rising Sorrow
[Verse I]
It seems I have everything I need
theres nothing I do lack
It seems I know where I'm going in life
having no regrets thinking back
[Chorus]
But as the sorrow rises up
all that I am becomes so meaningless
Its hard to stand these times
when my perception turns around
And theres noone who could help me
noone I could talk to
No matter what I try
no way to make it fine
[Verse II]
The fulfilled times now seem so distant
cant understand how I could think those thoughts
I dont know how to handle with these feelings
just hoping that tomorrow they'll be gone
[Chorus II]
(Bridge fehlt noch ^^)
ich bin als Gitarrist/Songwriter in einer Band tätig, nur habe ich bisher immer nur den musikalischen Teil unserer Songs geschriben, das hier ist mein erster Versuch selber einen Text zu schreiben ^^
Bitte um Feedback
Rising Sorrow
[Verse I]
It seems I have everything I need
theres nothing I do lack
It seems I know where I'm going in life
having no regrets thinking back
[Chorus]
But as the sorrow rises up
all that I am becomes so meaningless
Its hard to stand these times
when my perception turns around
And theres noone who could help me
noone I could talk to
No matter what I try
no way to make it fine
[Verse II]
The fulfilled times now seem so distant
cant understand how I could think those thoughts
I dont know how to handle with these feelings
just hoping that tomorrow they'll be gone
[Chorus II]
(Bridge fehlt noch ^^)
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