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Hi leute,
ich bin neu hier aufm board und wollte hier mal meinen selbstgeschriebenen englischen rap text posten. Dieser hat bis jetzt leider nur 2 parts, der rest wird noch kommen ;-)
Ich bitte euch ihn mal durchzuchecken, ob ihr fehler oder desgleichen findet.
Ich selbst bin 16 Jahre ^^.
MfG stillStaNding
Part 1 :
every weekend whey they are together
the same shit is going on ma house
I´ll try to escape there
but there is no possibility
an´ I have to hear that beef with my ears
how many times I was caught in the middle
try to to clearify it an´ not to be quiet
but it seems so that both of them couldn´t understand me
I look through the window an´ ma thoughts run there
Part 2 :
I´m sure that there are no other humans that have beef like they´ve
often I think about this, it makes me sad an´ I have to force me not to cry
to overcome it I write this shit down to forget, but its useless
like ma attempts which I´ve tried so long
I think I give it up ´cause I cannot see any progresses
and let them going on doing theire shit,i know its sad
ich bin neu hier aufm board und wollte hier mal meinen selbstgeschriebenen englischen rap text posten. Dieser hat bis jetzt leider nur 2 parts, der rest wird noch kommen ;-)
Ich bitte euch ihn mal durchzuchecken, ob ihr fehler oder desgleichen findet.
Ich selbst bin 16 Jahre ^^.
MfG stillStaNding
Part 1 :
every weekend whey they are together
the same shit is going on ma house
I´ll try to escape there
but there is no possibility
an´ I have to hear that beef with my ears
how many times I was caught in the middle
try to to clearify it an´ not to be quiet
but it seems so that both of them couldn´t understand me
I look through the window an´ ma thoughts run there
Part 2 :
I´m sure that there are no other humans that have beef like they´ve
often I think about this, it makes me sad an´ I have to force me not to cry
to overcome it I write this shit down to forget, but its useless
like ma attempts which I´ve tried so long
I think I give it up ´cause I cannot see any progresses
and let them going on doing theire shit,i know its sad
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