Amokrun

[Janus86]

Liebe Musiker

Ich würde gerne eure Meinung / Verbesserungsvorschläge zu den unten von mir verfassten Lyrics hören!
Es wird hierbei das Thema "Amoklauf" behandelt.
Falls mein Englisch stellenweise nicht passt bin ich sehr dankbar für Korrekturen!

Vielen Danke fürs Lesen und Schreiben!

Gruß Jan

Text:

i am a prisoner -- the prison is my life
the walls of this prison are solid and high
insurmountable -- this is my last try
my memory for you -- my last goodbye

All i see is darkness
all i feel is pain
why should i return
theres nothing more to gain

And i walk on my way -- there is nothing more to say
with a hole in my soul -- everything turns into grey
the scars in my heart -- testify my fight
with a gun in my hand -- walking into the light

And so i walk on this way -- there is nothing more to say
with a hole in my soul -- everything is grey
the scars in my heart -- testify my fight
the gun in my hand -- it will bring the light

if i am a demon -- this prison is the hell
so please help me out, from this infernal cell
but nobody frees me, this is my last try
my memory for you -- my last goodbye

All i see is darkness
all i feel is pain
why should i return
theres nothing more to gain

And i walk on my way -- there is nothing more to say
with a hole in my soul -- everything turns into grey
the scars in my heart -- testify my fight
with a gun in my hand -- walking into the light

And so i walk on this way -- there is nothing more to say
with a hole in my soul -- everything is grey
the scars in my heart -- testify my fight
the gun in my hand -- it will bring the light

so i submit to my fate
open up the prison gate
my perception is clear
trivial is my former fear

i paint your world from coloured into grey
now your paradies it fades away
The light becomes brighter and brighter, is it the sun?
this is the end of my amokrun