As The Sun Burns (On My Skin)

von Ruttma, 02.06.07.

  1. Ruttma

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    Erstellt: 02.06.07   #1
    Und weil die Sonne hier so schön scheint in Schweden habe ich gleich mal einen weiteren Text geschrieben. Dieses mal ein bischen poetischer. :p
    Ich bin wie üblich mal wieder gespannt, was ihr dazu sagt. :)


    Silence, only the wind is moving firmly
    As the sun burns on my skin
    Shadows are stalking from corner to corner
    As the sun burns on my skin

    I guess I need a medicine to slowly drown my sorrows
    I guess I need some help from you to gain some peace in me

    Is this my redemption?
    Is this my inquisition?
    Is this the only way to cure the troubles of my life?
    So where is my shelter?
    So where is my home?
    I know that I have company though my head feels alone

    The breath, the only thing which keeps me alive
    As the sun burns on my skin
    Nature, my only friend of life and death
    As the sun burns on my skin

    My fortress is build high, for none to reach the top
    I am the lonely regent, a god over a dead world.

    Is there some replacement?
    Any way I could escape?
    Anyone in charge to free my guilt so this suffering might end?
    The freedom for my crown!
    I give everything I own!

    As the sun burns on my skin
    I leave my throne…Back home…All alone...
     
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    Silence, only the wind is moving firmly
    As the sun burns on my skin
    Shadows are stalking from corner to corner
    As the sun burns on my skin
    normalerweise würde man sagen "as the sun is burning"

    I guess I need a medicine to slowly drown my sorrows
    I guess I need some help from you to gain some peace in me
    wenn gain, dann "peace in myself" ,,,ansonsten find statt gain

    Is this my redemption?
    Is this my inquisition?
    Is this the only way to cure the troubles of my life?
    So where is my shelter?
    So where is my home?
    I know that I have company though my head feels alone

    The breath, the only thing which keeps me alive
    As the sun burns on my skin
    Nature, my only friend of life and death
    As the sun burns on my skin

    My fortress is built high, for no one to reach the top
    richtig wär: so no one can reach the top
    I am the lonely regent, a god over a dead world.

    Is there some replacement?
    Any way I could escape?
    Anyone in charge to free my guilt so this suffering might end?
    The freedom for my crown!
    -the
    I give everything I own!

    As the sun burns on my skin
    I leave my throne…Back home…All alone...
    [/QUOTE]
     
  3. Ruttma

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    Silence, only the wind is moving firmly
    As the sun is burning on my skin
    Shadows are stalking from corner to corner
    As the sun is burning on my skin

    I guess I need a medicine to slowly drown my sorrows
    I guess I need some help from you to find some peace in me

    Is this my redemption?
    Is this my inquisition?
    Is this the only way to cure the troubles of my life?
    So where is my shelter?
    So where is my home?
    I know that I have company though my head feels alone

    The breath, the only thing which keeps me alive
    As the sun is burning on my skin
    Nature, my only friend of life and death
    As the sun is burning on my skin

    My fortress is built high, so no one can reach the top
    I am the lonely regent, a god over a dead world.

    Is there some replacement?
    Any way I could escape?
    Anyone in charge to free my guilt so this suffering might end?
    Freedom for my crown!
    I give everything I own!

    As the sun is burning on my skin
    I leave my throne…Back home…All alone..


    Wie, war das schon alles, mehr Fehler hab ich nicht? Wow, ich bin von mir selber erstaunt. :D
    Es seidenn, jemandem fällt noch etwas auf. :)
     
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    hab mich ja diesmal auch in weiser voraussicht zurückgehalten ;) :D
    und du hast es alles akzeptiert, ich bin begeistert :eek: :D :)
     
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    Erstellt: 02.06.07   #5
    Janu, die Paar Stellen waren hallt einfach zum akzeptieren schön. ;)
     
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