Avenging Angel

[Moerchen]

Hi,

hab hier mal einen Text meiner Band und wollte fragen, was ihr so davon haltet.
Die ersten beiden Strophen, sowie der Refrain werden relativ ruig gesungen, der Rest ist härter.
Musikstil ist ein Mix aus Power/Heavy/Thrash Metal.


Avenging Angel pt. 1 (The Resurrection)


One year ago, in the night of the devil,
I still remember the night that I fell
This gang of thugs, who thought they were rebels
Made my death a living hell
Now I’ve returned, it’s the Devil’s Night again,
Rain pours down and wash’s away the decay
I’ll seek justice in the place where it all began,
‘cause it can’t rain all the day
it can’t rain all the day

I was murdered but I’ll get my revenge
Until I’m done, forever I’ll stay
But it’s my angel that I need to avenge
They made her suffer, I’ll make them pay
The crow assist’s me, she’s my eye in the skies above
She sees more than I ever may
I won’t find rest until I finally return, my love,
‘cause it can’t rain all the day
no, it can’t rain all the day

(Bridge)
I am the stalker of the night
Avenging angel by my side
Soaring high up in the sky
She’s my conscience and my eye

Darkness holds my hand
As I tear into the night
Violence at my command
I can feel their mortal fright
I can see them
I can feel them

Vengeance is mine to take
My only guidance is the crow
I will make their bodies break
Feel my anger, feel it grow
Feel my anger
Fuel my hatred

(Break/Solo)

Burning, I will leave you there
I will hunt you, I will kill
There is no escape, I swear
You will kneel before my will
I will find you
I will kill you

Running won’t help you, fool
I am all around you now
Damnation, just like hell so cruel
I will get revenge somehow
Hear my name now
Eric Draven

(Chorus)
Avenging Angel
The Life I never had
Avenging Angel
The words I never said
Fly into the sky
My
Avenging Angel

Murder is your human shame
I’ll bring you suffering and pain
Top Dollar is the one to blame
Too many innocent’s were slain
Too much madness
Time for justice