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salut schreiberlinge und schreiberlinginnen...
hab auch mal wieder was zu papier gebracht. Bin mittelzufrieden mit, was aber egal ist
Aber bei grammatik bin ich mir irgendwie unsicher...
Findet ihr, dass das Ende genug rauskommt?
Danke fĂĽr jedes feedback,
Florin
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Can you tell me
Can you tell me why you were gone?
Can you tell me what IÂ’ve done?
Can you tell me if you havenÂ’t felt the magic?
Can you tell me why you havenÂ’t stayed?
Can you tell me, can you tell me
why you were gone.
Don’t wanne hear it when you’re saying “I love you” to a different guy than me.
DonÂ’t wanne see it when youÂ’re taking his hand with brightness in your eyes?
DonÂ’t wanne smell just your perfume when you pass by me.
DonÂ’t wanne feel that you feel about nothing, that you donÂ’t look at me, no time.
Can you tell me, can you tell me
why you were gone.
Can you tell me if thereÂ’s maybe another time IÂ’ll see you.
Can you tell me if it could be that youÂ’d also feel the magic?
Can you tell me if IÂ’d dare to speak to you?
Will I dare to address you one time?
Can you tell me, can you tell me
why you were gone.
hab auch mal wieder was zu papier gebracht. Bin mittelzufrieden mit, was aber egal ist
Findet ihr, dass das Ende genug rauskommt?
Danke fĂĽr jedes feedback,
Florin
________________
Can you tell me
Can you tell me why you were gone?
Can you tell me what IÂ’ve done?
Can you tell me if you havenÂ’t felt the magic?
Can you tell me why you havenÂ’t stayed?
Can you tell me, can you tell me
why you were gone.
Don’t wanne hear it when you’re saying “I love you” to a different guy than me.
DonÂ’t wanne see it when youÂ’re taking his hand with brightness in your eyes?
DonÂ’t wanne smell just your perfume when you pass by me.
DonÂ’t wanne feel that you feel about nothing, that you donÂ’t look at me, no time.
Can you tell me, can you tell me
why you were gone.
Can you tell me if thereÂ’s maybe another time IÂ’ll see you.
Can you tell me if it could be that youÂ’d also feel the magic?
Can you tell me if IÂ’d dare to speak to you?
Will I dare to address you one time?
Can you tell me, can you tell me
why you were gone.
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