Hallo ich hab mich mal gewagt nen Text hier bewerten zulassen, den ich schon vor ner Weile geschrieben hab Genremäßig sollte er für nen Viking Metal Song gedacht sein. Wenn die Schrift nich gefällt/ man es nich lesen kann, stell ich es noch mal rein. sieht aber toll aus ^^ Destiny Darkness fills the air Sound of war at horizon Blood in the lair The hell gate is open Swords in bloody hands Helms on wounded heads War drums in my ear To reduce the internal fear. With my sword in the hand I fight With my sword in the hand I fight I fight against the enemy I fight against the things I see Dawn of war is reality Dusk of war is reality Dying for my Gods, thats my destiny I pray to Oden To sent me to Heaven When I felt bows sticking in my chest. I know I was blessed. Fightin for Oden, figthin for Thor Thats my destiny Sword by Sword in a bloody War Thats what I need. With my sword in the hand I fight With my sword in the hand I fight I fight against the enemy I fight against the things I see Dawn of war is reality Dusk of war is reality Dying for my Gods, thats my destiny Im one of them lying on the field Darkness fills my eyes I dont hear any War Just feelin happy like never before My last warcry, like Heimdalls horne Im sent to Heaven Oden takes me home With my sword in the hand I fight With my sword in the hand I fight I fight against the enemy I fight against the things I see Dawn of war is reality Dusk of war is reality Dying for my Gods, thats my destiny
Hmm ich mag ja keine Doppelposts, aber is der text wirklich so schlecht? Wenn ja, was kann man ändern? Dit würde mir wirklcih helfen
