Destiny

[GigaDrow]

Hallo
ich hab mich mal gewagt nen Text hier bewerten zulassen, den ich schon vor ner Weile geschrieben hab
Genremäßig sollte er für nen Viking Metal Song gedacht sein.
Wenn die Schrift nich gefällt/ man es nich lesen kann, stell ich es noch mal rein. sieht aber toll aus ^^

Destiny



Darkness fills the air

Sound of war at horizon

Blood in the lair

The hell gate is open



Swords in bloody hands

Helms on wounded heads

War drums in my ear

To reduce the internal fear.



With my sword in the hand I fight

With my sword in the hand I fight

I fight against the enemy

I fight against the things I see

Dawn of war is reality

Dusk of war is reality

Dying for my Gods, that’s my destiny



I pray to Oden

To sent me to Heaven

When I felt bows sticking in my chest.

I know I was blessed.



Fightin’ for Oden, figthin’ for Thor

That’s my destiny

Sword by Sword in a bloody War

That’s what I need.


With my sword in the hand I fight

With my sword in the hand I fight

I fight against the enemy

I fight against the things I see

Dawn of war is reality

Dusk of war is reality

Dying for my Gods, that’s my destiny



I’m one of them lying on the field

Darkness fills my eyes

I don’t hear any War

Just feelin’ happy like never before


My last warcry,

like Heimdall’s horne

I’m sent to Heaven

Oden takes me home


With my sword in the hand I fight

With my sword in the hand I fight

I fight against the enemy

I fight against the things I see

Dawn of war is reality

Dusk of war is reality

Dying for my Gods, that’s my destiny

 

[GigaDrow]

Hmm
ich mag ja keine Doppelposts, aber is der text wirklich so schlecht?
Wenn ja, was kann man ändern?
Dit würde mir wirklcih helfen