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- 05.09.08
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Hai !
Ich bin 13 jahre alt (fast 14 juuhu xD) und hab letzens angefangen lieder zu schreiben immoment hab ich nur eins fertig bekommen.. Und da ich noch gar keine erfahrung habe wollte ich fragen was ihr denn von dem text haltet? (mein englisch ist auch nicht das beste..)
Just be Yourself
Strophe:
In the school You're someone else
Why don't you try to be Yourself?
You change your opinion
just because of your controlling friends
and those crazy "trends"
Refrain:
Just be Yourself
You always try to be another
You always try to be like the other
Why, why?
You want to fit in with the rest
But it's the best
when You're not acting someone else
someone who You aren't
Just be Yourself
Strophe:
When we are alone You're so neat
but when I meet you on the street
You try to be rude like your friend
Why don't you try to defend..
against the control?Don't you know it hurts?
Refrain:
Just be Yourself
You always try to be another
You always try to be like the other
Why, why?
You want to fit in with the rest
But it's the best
when You're not acting someone else
someone who You aren't
Just be Yourself
(das weiß ich nicht wie man das nennt..)
I wish I would know who you are
I wish You would be not that far
I wish You would be Youself
...No one else
Just Yourself
Refrain:
Just be Yourself
DON'T try to be another
(Who you aren't)
Find other ways to belong to the other
(but not like that)
Why, why?
'Cuz it's the best
For You and the rest
So DON'T try to acting someone else
someone who You aren't
JUST BE YOURSELF
(Just Yourself)
Ich würd mich sehr freuen wenn ihr mir sagen könnt was ich verbessern könnte oder ob der fehler drinne sind.. brauch KRITIK! DANKE!
Mfg opsala
Ich bin 13 jahre alt (fast 14 juuhu xD) und hab letzens angefangen lieder zu schreiben immoment hab ich nur eins fertig bekommen.. Und da ich noch gar keine erfahrung habe wollte ich fragen was ihr denn von dem text haltet? (mein englisch ist auch nicht das beste..)
Just be Yourself
Strophe:
In the school You're someone else
Why don't you try to be Yourself?
You change your opinion
just because of your controlling friends
and those crazy "trends"
Refrain:
Just be Yourself
You always try to be another
You always try to be like the other
Why, why?
You want to fit in with the rest
But it's the best
when You're not acting someone else
someone who You aren't
Just be Yourself
Strophe:
When we are alone You're so neat
but when I meet you on the street
You try to be rude like your friend
Why don't you try to defend..
against the control?Don't you know it hurts?
Refrain:
Just be Yourself
You always try to be another
You always try to be like the other
Why, why?
You want to fit in with the rest
But it's the best
when You're not acting someone else
someone who You aren't
Just be Yourself
(das weiß ich nicht wie man das nennt..)
I wish I would know who you are
I wish You would be not that far
I wish You would be Youself
...No one else
Just Yourself
Refrain:
Just be Yourself
DON'T try to be another
(Who you aren't)
Find other ways to belong to the other
(but not like that)
Why, why?
'Cuz it's the best
For You and the rest
So DON'T try to acting someone else
someone who You aren't
JUST BE YOURSELF
(Just Yourself)
Ich würd mich sehr freuen wenn ihr mir sagen könnt was ich verbessern könnte oder ob der fehler drinne sind.. brauch KRITIK! DANKE!
Mfg opsala
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