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sancho1980
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hab mal versucht einen kleinen engl. text zu schreiben. mir ist schon bewusst, das es nichts "dolles" ist, aber klein muss man ja nun mal anfangen.....
das soll mal eine rocknummer werden, vielleicht könntet ihr mir ja mal ein paar vorschläge machen, was zu ändern wäre............danke!
1. Strophe
Waking up every day.
Feeling sick but all I can say,
something that makes me mad.
Will make me loose my head.
I remember the night was long.
And I try to singin this song.
Something happens to me.
Now I know , what is wrong.
It`s hard for me to say .
I Fell in love , yesterday
2. strophe
I dont know , is it good for me?
A stupid word L O V E
4 letters strong like tree.
and breakable like a pea.
No motivation to think about this,
Life goes on , no fear for a miss.
Once again I try to singin this song,
have no idea what is wrong.
It`s hard for me to say .
I Fell in love , yesterday
das soll mal eine rocknummer werden, vielleicht könntet ihr mir ja mal ein paar vorschläge machen, was zu ändern wäre............danke!
1. Strophe
Waking up every day.
Feeling sick but all I can say,
something that makes me mad.
Will make me loose my head.
I remember the night was long.
And I try to singin this song.
Something happens to me.
Now I know , what is wrong.
It`s hard for me to say .
I Fell in love , yesterday
2. strophe
I dont know , is it good for me?
A stupid word L O V E
4 letters strong like tree.
and breakable like a pea.
No motivation to think about this,
Life goes on , no fear for a miss.
Once again I try to singin this song,
have no idea what is wrong.
It`s hard for me to say .
I Fell in love , yesterday
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