Hallo Community, ein Bandkollege hat einen Text geschreiben, aber ich wollte mal fragen, ob das alles so mit der Grammatik stimmt. Wäre nett wenn ihr mir helfen könntet Hier nun der Text: Vers 1: talk to me, talk to me, give me a noise the only thing i want to hear is your voice so tell me something i want to hear so bring us two far away from here come on let's go that's not the right place to talk, come leT's do it,why we don`t have a walk? you seem to be very nervous,nearly freaking out, the last step isn't far away so let it out Refrain: silence is the only thing i hear when we are alone, silence is that i can't stand all day long, if you dont talk you will get alone, and then u notice you did something wrong Vers 2: i cant stand that silence around here we got, i would be so happy if you talk now, just a bit it doesn't have to be a lot, so come on ,give it to me give it to me right now. what happened in the past,you wouldnt tell it to me, well somehow i will know it some time anyway, but i always ask myself,what she did or who she is, i dont know her long , but she's the only thing i miss. Bridge: she called saying things to me she never said before, "let's meet at five on the bridge,ihave to tell you something more", i went to the bridge with a good feeling,ready for something new, so she told me that things that i never knew. "i like you very much but i have a secret,you should know. i don't know how to tell you than it's very sad" then she said something i will never forget "my uncle is your dad" Refrain 2: we never met again,i wouldnt even like to. i never saw her before,and never again. i liked this girl so much,kissed her one time or two. but now i just want to never see her again.