Stefan Jenniches
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Hey, ich will euch einen Song vorstellen andem ich momentan bastel. Thematik ist Schönheit. Die Hörprobe ist bei weitem nicht perfekt, aber gibt einen Einblick in den Song und die Struktur steht soweit schonmal 
Oh und ich seh grade erst, dass der Song ja doch über 6min hat
Ich denke ich werde die zweite Strophe rausnehmen und nach dem ersten Refrain gleich in die Brdge gehen.
https://soundcloud.com/stefan-jenniches/ordinary-unique-horprobe
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VERSE I
It‘s pure, warm, sweet and unreal.
A piece of the whole i found here.
A feeling of security among us,
allow us to be you and me .
PRE CHOURUS
It‘s all we want, all we need. The other part to feel complete.
it's the opposite, the other side of misery.
REFRAIN
2x Ahh
Do we find or do we create this moment here of beauty?
It dosent matter, now we are here to feel ordinary unique.
No realese without tension we‘re forced to embrace the friction.
A rainbow needs sun and rain it can‘t show up everyday.
Verse
It‘s pure, warm,sweet and unreal.
A piece of the whole i found here.
A feeling of trust among us,
allow us to be you and me
PRE CHOURUS
It‘s all we want, all we need. The other part to feel complete.
its the opposite, the other side of misery.
REFRAIN
2x Ahh
Do we find or do we create this moment here of beauty?
It dosent matter, now we are here to fill it up and suck it dry.
No realese without tension we‘re forced to embrace the friction.
A rainbow needs sun and rain it can‘t show up everyday.
Bridge
Find meaning somwhere in between nothing and everthing.
See the glimmer of beauty somewhere in between order and chaos.
Well if nothing matters why should i suffer any longer?
Rest you mind for a while, take your time, set your goal and pick up your burden.
REFRAIN
Do we find or do we create this moment here of beauty?!
it dosent matter, now we are here to fill it up and suck it dry
no realese without tension we‘re forced to embrace the friction
a rainbow needs sun and rain it can‘t show up everyday
Oh und ich seh grade erst, dass der Song ja doch über 6min hat
Ich denke ich werde die zweite Strophe rausnehmen und nach dem ersten Refrain gleich in die Brdge gehen.https://soundcloud.com/stefan-jenniches/ordinary-unique-horprobe
Was haltet ihr vom Text und Umsetzung?
Freue mich auf euer Feedback
Englisch
VERSE I
It‘s pure, warm, sweet and unreal.
A piece of the whole i found here.
A feeling of security among us,
allow us to be you and me .
PRE CHOURUS
It‘s all we want, all we need. The other part to feel complete.
it's the opposite, the other side of misery.
REFRAIN
2x Ahh
Do we find or do we create this moment here of beauty?
It dosent matter, now we are here to feel ordinary unique.
No realese without tension we‘re forced to embrace the friction.
A rainbow needs sun and rain it can‘t show up everyday.
Verse
It‘s pure, warm,sweet and unreal.
A piece of the whole i found here.
A feeling of trust among us,
allow us to be you and me
PRE CHOURUS
It‘s all we want, all we need. The other part to feel complete.
its the opposite, the other side of misery.
REFRAIN
2x Ahh
Do we find or do we create this moment here of beauty?
It dosent matter, now we are here to fill it up and suck it dry.
No realese without tension we‘re forced to embrace the friction.
A rainbow needs sun and rain it can‘t show up everyday.
Bridge
Find meaning somwhere in between nothing and everthing.
See the glimmer of beauty somewhere in between order and chaos.
Well if nothing matters why should i suffer any longer?
Rest you mind for a while, take your time, set your goal and pick up your burden.
REFRAIN
Do we find or do we create this moment here of beauty?!
it dosent matter, now we are here to fill it up and suck it dry
no realese without tension we‘re forced to embrace the friction
a rainbow needs sun and rain it can‘t show up everyday
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