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Hallöchen!
Ich präsentiere euch hier mal einen Songtext von mir, der heute Vormittag entstanden ist.
Der Titel des Ganzen lautet vorläufig erstmal "Talks". Vielleicht fällt mir später ein etwas interessanter klingender Titel ein.
Ich hoffe auf konstruktive Kritik! Und bitte etwas nachsichtig sein, ich bin kein geübter Songwriter.
[Verse 1]
Talks
they fill the TVs
and newspaper articles
Wish they would disappear
Words
that have not much too say
the same lame excuses
so well rehearsed
[Prechorus]
I'm
still waiting for the day
when one of them comes up
with something that is a real solution...
[Chorus]
...and we could say
you've finally got something done
[Verse 2]
Theorys
filling the heads
but never coming real
I guess things won't change
Action
yeah, where's the action?
There's a lack of passion
combined with ignorance
[Prechorus]
I'm
still waiting for the day
when one of them comes up
with something that is a real solution...
[Chorus]
... and we could say
you've finally got something done
You didn't let us down
You didn't betray our trust
[Verse 3]
Talks
they do no harm
As long as we're just talking
everything is quite okay
Talks
they're no-good
As long as we're just talking
the same shit goes on and on
Ich präsentiere euch hier mal einen Songtext von mir, der heute Vormittag entstanden ist.
Der Titel des Ganzen lautet vorläufig erstmal "Talks". Vielleicht fällt mir später ein etwas interessanter klingender Titel ein.
Ich hoffe auf konstruktive Kritik! Und bitte etwas nachsichtig sein, ich bin kein geübter Songwriter.
[Verse 1]
Talks
they fill the TVs
and newspaper articles
Wish they would disappear
Words
that have not much too say
the same lame excuses
so well rehearsed
[Prechorus]
I'm
still waiting for the day
when one of them comes up
with something that is a real solution...
[Chorus]
...and we could say
you've finally got something done
[Verse 2]
Theorys
filling the heads
but never coming real
I guess things won't change
Action
yeah, where's the action?
There's a lack of passion
combined with ignorance
[Prechorus]
I'm
still waiting for the day
when one of them comes up
with something that is a real solution...
[Chorus]
... and we could say
you've finally got something done
You didn't let us down
You didn't betray our trust
[Verse 3]
Talks
they do no harm
As long as we're just talking
everything is quite okay
Talks
they're no-good
As long as we're just talking
the same shit goes on and on
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