absoluterfreak
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Hallöle,
hier wieder ein Text von mir...
basiert auf einem Traum von mir, aber mich würde interessieren, ob ihr den "Sinn" trotzdem versteht
bzw wie ihr ihn deuten würdet, und welche Art von Musik eurer Meinung nach am Besten dazu passen würde.
Na ja und alle anderen Verbesserungsvorschläge natürlich auch.
(Rot ist der Refrain)
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The Prisoner
It was the crowd (oh) that made me look down upon you
So they should better shut their face
Your hands could kill so I listened to your eyes
Words might have been the better way
I reached a hand out to you
To gain a look on the forbidden land
But deep inside
I knew, I know, Ill know
The chains looked misplaced (oh) on your hands
Words built a pleasant frightening dream
You were no stranger to the bite of their scorpions
You had me poisoned that day
And though this all is just another worm hole in my head
It feels so real it makes me want to scream, I scream
A dream could never be this cruel
Never would I have thought
I could find comfort in such unknown faces
Here in the eye of storm, in the strangest of places
Never would I have walked this way on my own
I needed you to show me what my mind had already done
Their eyes are open (oh) but their minds
Melt in the sun as they go
And they called you liar
But what do they know
This wont get better anyway
When the storm is over Ill carve a cross into the wood
They told me you were gone but I had to see your blood
Before you moved on you tossed me off my rails
I felt like a coward and I know youll always make me pay
hier wieder ein Text von mir...
basiert auf einem Traum von mir, aber mich würde interessieren, ob ihr den "Sinn" trotzdem versteht
bzw wie ihr ihn deuten würdet, und welche Art von Musik eurer Meinung nach am Besten dazu passen würde.Na ja und alle anderen Verbesserungsvorschläge natürlich auch.
(Rot ist der Refrain)
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The Prisoner
It was the crowd (oh) that made me look down upon you
So they should better shut their face
Your hands could kill so I listened to your eyes
Words might have been the better way
I reached a hand out to you
To gain a look on the forbidden land
But deep inside
I knew, I know, Ill know
The chains looked misplaced (oh) on your hands
Words built a pleasant frightening dream
You were no stranger to the bite of their scorpions
You had me poisoned that day
And though this all is just another worm hole in my head
It feels so real it makes me want to scream, I scream
A dream could never be this cruel
Never would I have thought
I could find comfort in such unknown faces
Here in the eye of storm, in the strangest of places
Never would I have walked this way on my own
I needed you to show me what my mind had already done
Their eyes are open (oh) but their minds
Melt in the sun as they go
And they called you liar
But what do they know
This wont get better anyway
When the storm is over Ill carve a cross into the wood
They told me you were gone but I had to see your blood
Before you moved on you tossed me off my rails
I felt like a coward and I know youll always make me pay
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