Turning Point (deutscher schreibt englisch)

[QuarkSalbe]

Hi,
ich als "deutschtexter" möchte jetzt auch mal einen englischen text haben
Ich weiß jetzt nicht wie gut (grammatikalisch) der text unten ist,
Es wär schön, wenn jemand von euch mal den rotstift ansetzen könnte.
Oder mir den kopf streicheln á la, super text, super grammatik super,... blabla
Lange Einleitung, kurzer Sinn,... da ist das meisterstück^^:

Turning Point

We are not friends and we don't love we didn't even know
oh please jeah please let me please let me alone
You always said like family but only pointed at me
it is time time to leave me, time to leave me alone

I don't believe what you've said, what you pretend to be
And I am well known to be to be longanimous

Oh But but you don't listen well, miss my scream,
you are, you are this selfish, you are this selfish anymore
And you can't hear my voice, cause you are selfishy folk
please, oh please let me, please let me free

Gave my hand and lost my arm too late I realized why
am I not more than that, am I not more
But some times you must decide, and now it's the turning point
I would'n put up with it again, wouldn't put up again

I last had a really happy dream about life without you
it is too good to become true, too good to become true
(2nd-Voice)
It is far away I respect you don't you notice this
there is not any love behind, no love left behind

But you don't listen well, miss my scream,
y'are this selfish anymore
And you can't hear my voice, cause you're selfishy folk
please let me free


reach the point of no return you are nearly there
It is time to go, time to go far away...

 

[Heaven Insane]

Ich schreib mal wie ich das formulieren würde in Englisch...

We are not friends and we don't love we didn't even know // we are no friends... we dont love (each other?)
oh please jeah please let me please let me alone // jedes 2. wort please, mach mal "," damit man weiß ob please let me alone oder let me please, let me alone

You always said like family but only pointed at me // Meinst du die Beziehung zw. euch ? dann said we were like family
it is time time to leave me, time to leave me alone

I don't believe what you've said, what you pretend to be
And I am well known to be to be longanimous

Oh But but you don't listen well, miss my scream, // würd prät. -> haven´t listened, missed my scream
you are, you are this selfish, you are this selfish anymore
And you can't hear my voice, cause you are selfishy folk
please, oh please let me, please let me free

Gave my hand and lost my arm too late I realized why // wieso so komisch gestellT? seh kein reim ;D
"I´ve given you my hand, but too late i realized I´ve lost my arm"

am I not more than that, am I not more
But some times you must decide, and now it's the turning point //sometimes und have to nehmen
I would'n put up with it again, wouldn't put up again

I last had a really happy dream about life without you // Last I had ...
it is too good to become true, too good to become true // das is komisch, klar was de meinst, überleg mal ob du was anderes findst

(2nd-Voice)
It is far away I respect you don't you notice this // Wieder ohne "," kann nur raten -> I respect you, haven´t you noticed?
there is not any love behind, no love left behind // no love behind

But you don't listen well, miss my scream, // don´t -> didn´t, miss-> missed
y'are this selfish anymore
And you can't hear my voice, cause you're selfishy folk
please let me free


reach the point of no return you are nearly there // you are near to reach the point of no return
It is time to go, time to go far away...
__________

das war anstrengend..
weiß net ob ich der beste für den roten stift bin denke eigtl nicht, aber ich denke für dich ist jede antwort gut ^^
Man merkt halt sehr, dass du den Text im deutschen vor augen hast und dann ins englische übersetzt
aber ÜBUNG MACHT DEN MEISTER

THE SHOW MUST GO ON !!