Depresing you say?

von Ruttma, 31.07.07.

  1. Ruttma

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    Erstellt: 31.07.07   #1
    Den Text habe ich für eine gute Freundin von mir geschrieben, die irgendwie immer nur die harten Seiten des Lebens abzubekommen scheint, aber irgendwie auch ein wenig selber daran beteiligt zu sein scheint. Zu min. soll das ganze Objektiv wirken und ich meine dass man das auch merkt, wenn man sich den Text durchließt. Es ist halt teils aufbauend und teils hinterfragend, wieso sie so drauf ist, wie sie es ist...Naja schaut/leßt selber.

    You'd better dry your silent tears, you had pain enough,
    enough for centuries to come!
    Always introverted, always burried the/your sorrow,
    in a body that couln't take (any)more!
    So many tried to reach out for you, as you were feeling bad,
    but they ran into an invisible wall!
    So many put their hopes in you, but they all fell from the skies,
    as they faced your hurt feelings!

    So tell me what do you want?!
    What is your deepest desire?!
    What is the symptom of your fragile hear and why...
    Why won't you accept help when it's offered?

    'Cause there were many who tried to reach out for you
    but you always slipped away!
    Burried yourself deeper in torment, starting the same play
    over and over again!
    Escaping in your secured world, where you have the controll
    Nothing there to harm you!
    A briliant fasade of irony and sorrow, your constant followers
    How long can you hold this up?

    So tell me what do you want?!
    Where (is) the problem in your heart?!
    Is it because you feel safe, when you are alone and why...
    Why do you cover your eyes, when someone wants to help?

    I don't want you tu hurt yourself!
    I don't want you to feel bad!
    But how to reach a person, I barelys know?
    But how to mainstain steady, as you start to block?

    Is it peace that you seek?
    Is it peace in your soul?
    Is your deepest desire to become purged?
    To start your life over again?

    I wish (that) I could some something more,
    then just thinking about it!
    I wish (that) I could take some harm
    from your pierced heart!
    I hope (that) you manage your way out
    to become a new you!
    I hope (that) you use every moment
    to grow strong again!

    It is depressing you say?
    You say you always need to help?
    Finish everything once you have started?
    It has become imposible for me...
    To see through you...
    And your self-absorbed world!
     
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    Erstellt: 31.07.07   #2
    depressing

    You'd better dry your silent tears, you had pain enough,
    you had enough pain
    oder
    you had pain [pause] enough

    enough for centuries to come!
    Always introverted, always burried the/your sorrow,
    your sorrows
    in a body that couldn't take (any)more!
    any more
    So many tried to reach out for you, as you were feeling bad,
    but they ran into an invisible wall!
    der satz ist irgendwie im vergleich zum rest nichtso schön ausgedrückt...wie wärs mit "but you let/had them run against a wall (of fear)
    So many put their hopes in you, but they all fell from the skies,
    as they faced your hurt feelings!

    So tell me what do you want?!
    What is your deepest desire?!
    What is the symptom of your fragile hear and why...
    hear?
    Why won't you accept help when it's offered?
    der satz is auch wieder so unlyrisch,,,,naja, is ja nich falsch
    'Cause there were many who tried to reach out for you
    but you always slipped away!
    Burried yourself deeper in torment, starting the same play
    game
    over and over again!
    Escaping in your secured world, where you have the controll
    into, ,,,,where you are in control
    Nothing there to harm you!
    A brilliant facade of irony and sorrow, your constant followers
    How long can you hold this up?
    besser keep statt hold

    So tell me what do you want?!
    Where (is) the problem in your heart?!
    is / 's
    Is it because you feel safe, when you are alone and why...
    Why do you cover your eyes, when someone wants to help?

    I don't want you to hurt yourself!
    I don't want you to feel bad!
    But how to reach a person, I barelys know?
    but how can i reach a person i barely know
    But how to mainstain steady, as you start to block?
    how should i stay determined (oder so),,,when you start to block

    Is it peace that you seek?
    Is it peace in your soul?
    Is your deepest desire to become purged?
    get purged
    To start your life over again?

    I wish (that) I could some something more,
    i wish i could do more than just (to) think about it
    then just thinking about it!
    I wish (that) I could take some harm
    take some harm away
    from your pierced heart!
    I hope (that) you manage your way out
    i hope you will make your way out
    to become a new you!
    I hope (that) you use every moment
    to grow strong again!
    i hope you will use

    It is depressing you say?
    You say you always need to help?
    Finnish everything once you have started?
    It has become impossible for me...
    To see through you...
    And your self-absorbed world!
     
  3. Ruttma

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    You'd better dry your silent tears, you had enough pain, - Sorum gefällt mir das ganze doch ein wenig besser. :)
    enough for centuries to come!
    Always introverted, always burried your sorrows,
    in a body that couldn't take anymore!
    So many tried to reach out for you, as you were feeling bad,
    but they ran into an invisible wall!
    der satz ist irgendwie im vergleich zum rest nichtso schön ausgedrückt...wie wärs mit "but you let/had them run against a wall (of fear) - Das ist es ja eben, sie merkt es ja selber nicht mal mehr, dass sie Leute wegblockt..Daher ist soetwas wie let oder had ein wenig schwer einzusetzten.
    So many put their hopes in you, but they all fell from the skies,
    as they faced your hurt feelings!

    So tell me what do you want?!
    What is your deepest desire?!
    What is the symptom of your fragile heart and why... - Jaja, ein kleiner Tipfehler mal wieder.
    Why won't you accept help when it's offered?
    der satz is auch wieder so unlyrisch,,,,naja, is ja nich falsch - Das sehen wir, sofern das ganze umgesetzt werden soll. :D
    'Cause there were many who tried to reach out for you
    but you always slipped away!
    Burried yourself deeper in torment, starting the same game
    over and over again!
    Escaping into your secured world, where you are in controll - Das klingt auch gleich ein bischen schöner.
    Nothing there to harm you!
    A brilliant facade of irony and sorrow, your constant followers
    How long can you keep this up?

    So tell me what do you want?!
    Where is the problem in your heart?!
    Is it because you feel safe, when you are alone and why...
    Why do you cover your eyes, when someone wants to help?

    I don't want you to hurt yourself!
    I don't want you to feel bad!
    But how to reach a person, I barelys know?
    but how can i reach a person i barely know
    But how to maintain steady, as you start to block? - Wow, dieses mal etwas zu viel und der Sinn geht flöten.

    Is it peace that you seek?
    Is it peace in your soul?
    Is your deepest desire to get purged?
    To start your life over again?

    I wish I could do more than just to think about it, - Yep, ist auch nen schöner Satz. :)
    then just thinking about it!
    I wish (that) I could take some harm
    take some harm away
    from your pierced heart!
    I hope (that) you manage your way out
    i hope you will make your way out
    to become a new you!
    I hope (that) you use every moment
    to grow strong again!
    i hope you will use

    It is depressing you say?
    You say you always need to help?
    Finnish everything once you have started?
    It has become impossible for me...
    To see through you...
    And your self-absorbed world!
     
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